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Wrapped Within Her Silence

I long to hear Your voice my dear So please come near Sing me a note In silence bring Me everything On spread dual wing Let our love float Theme one:Remember what peace there may be in silence For Nette's Desiderata contest. First time trying this form Written December 7th 2014 By: Richard Lamoureux My original ending was: Whisper softly When I'm lonely My sweet only On love we'll float Unfortunately softly doesn't conform with the rhyme rules.

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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2015 12:02:00 AM
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I loved it....Romantic and sweet. In true love...silence speaks volumes. Missing you...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/30/2015 8:45:00 AM
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:) Hi! Rise and shine!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2015 8:44:00 AM
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Good Morning!
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 12/31/2014 10:20:00 AM
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Awww.... Finally a breeze :D, I'll sing you the note ^^ haha, This is so romantic Rick! Made my day. Hug . yanny
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/14/2014 10:32:00 AM
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I was trying to find the poem that Maurice has been inspired by to write his recent poem about a blessed woman. Was it this one? In any event, this is beautiful.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2014 6:55:00 PM
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I believe it was a comment I wrote rather than an actual poem.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 12/12/2014 8:03:00 AM
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Very,very romantic Richard!Charma
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2014 9:39:00 AM
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Thanks Charmaine.
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 12/9/2014 10:56:00 AM
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An interesting form. a tender poem! Well done my friend, Richard. Good luck!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 1:56:00 PM
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Thanks Demetrios.
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 12/8/2014 7:25:00 AM
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Beautiful! sometimes the sounds of silence are the loudest sounds in the world.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2014 7:30:00 AM
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So true.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 12/7/2014 11:33:00 AM
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I see why you like the original, Hello darkness my old friend I've come to talk to you again ..Paul Simon...good luck in the contest
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 2:16:00 PM
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Thanks Frederic.
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Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 12/7/2014 10:40:00 AM
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A delight to read,goodluck in the contest Richard...huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 2:17:00 PM
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Hugs back and thanks Kayode.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 12/7/2014 9:16:00 AM
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You did a wonderful job, this is an amazing write. Good luck with the contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 9:19:00 AM
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Thankyou my friend.
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Race Benoit
Date: 12/7/2014 9:15:00 AM
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I like your second ending Richard, much more (in my opinion) poetic . . .
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 9:19:00 AM
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That is good news, I hope Nette likes it as well. Thanks!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2014 8:36:00 AM
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- Sooo sweet and lovely written, Richard - Luck in contest .... hope you win - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 8:46:00 AM
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Me too *lol*.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/7/2014 8:35:00 AM
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You make everything seem so smooth and flawless, Richard! :) How lovely!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 8:45:00 AM
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I like my original ending better but I think this works as well. Thanks for the vote of confidence. This was harder than I expected.
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Donna Jones
Date: 12/7/2014 8:17:00 AM
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Wow...lovely lovely Richard....good morning.and good luck...:-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 8:27:00 AM
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Thanks for the wishes and the luck Donna. Hugs Rick.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/7/2014 8:04:00 AM
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Very romantic Richard....Have a fabulous Sunday
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/7/2014 9:20:00 AM
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I like the second too
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 8:26:00 AM
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You as well Tim.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2014 7:58:00 AM
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Beautifully written with a lovely gentle flow Richard - you need your name etc etc if it is for Nette's contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2014 8:26:00 AM
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:-) xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/7/2014 8:25:00 AM
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Thanks Jan, you read it before I had finished. Thanks for watching out for me. I have forgotten in the past. Hugs back to you.

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