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Wouldn'T It

wouldn't it be nice that if when i write about her she was writing about me wouldn't it be neat that if i peeked at her and she peeked back at me wouldn't it be cute that when i go to sleep i would pray for her and she would pray for me wouldn't it be swell if i had a friend to tell that swore to me that he wouldn't tell the deepest secret i've ever held and just the same if she had a friend upon which she could also depend and tell her friend her secret about me how she secretly loved me wouldn't it be sweet if one day we meet and found ourselves together alone wrapped in feelings kept so long won't our eye's give us away won't our trembling keep our tongues at bay would not blushing show the condition of our hearts wouldn't our studder not hide our content of being in our presence a royal being a conjunction of the stars meeting in the sky the meeting of soul mates

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/10/2009 9:15:00 PM
To find a soul mate would be very special indeed John. Lovely romantic thought John. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/18/2009 7:09:00 AM
you better call this girl right now. life is too short to not. smile...janett. well written and great to read.
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Date: 9/2/2009 3:14:00 PM
Nice writing, reminds me of young crushes.
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Date: 8/27/2009 5:04:00 PM
Aww dear John I am sure your lady love feels the same.......Alas for me ...not to be for many years....The Southern Belle....Soup Mail
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Date: 8/27/2009 10:54:00 AM
So innovative. Great work, John. Good to hear from you, friend. Love, daver
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Date: 8/26/2009 9:39:00 PM
I have a buddy going through these feelings..and I'm trying to guide him! not easy! good write! jhl! and thanks for welcome comments!... yes! my higher Power is always at my side! (and my Guardian Angel!)
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:47:00 PM
that was beautiful i loves it you shoued alot of emotion lovely ~ cortney
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:10:00 PM
so very charming! Light & Love
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Date: 8/25/2009 5:37:00 AM
Oh yes it would be grand John. Thank you for sharing your heart today. ~~~Outstanding~~~ Love, Carol
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Date: 8/25/2009 2:24:00 AM
this poem speaks from your heart and soul John......what a soul mate that would be,you writng about her,she writing about you,she prays for you and you pray for her,fiding yourself wrapped with your loved one.a dream of all the people in the world to find true love which isnt always easy--this goes to my favs........it touched me--charma
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Date: 8/24/2009 5:51:00 PM
The things you seek are sought by many of us, John. Finding a soul mate is special indeed. I haven't found any "muscle men" to help with my move, but I am getting very strong with all the lifting. Maybe I should go out for the Olympics weight-lifting competition? Love you! Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2009 5:27:00 PM
Very passionate. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:13:00 PM
Lovely thoughts!! I would grant those wishes for you if I could :)!! Carrie
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