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Would You Still Love Me If I Wasn'T a Poet?

Would you still love me If I wasn't a poet? If I was not a climbing jasmine on your window-sill, a rose-bud in bloom, the soft zephyr breeze on an early afternoon. Would you still love me If I was not the sunrise in your day, the sunset in your smile, a lavender in your grey. Would you still love me If the world of Oz I didn't give to you, If all mermaids vanished in the deepest blue. Would you still love me If the calm and gentle rain was nothing more than tears of pain, If the sound of our laughter was never heard again, Would you call my name? Would you still love me? Would you still love me If I bid farewell to fantasies, Acted just the way I am, not as a pretty princess, but as a simple island girl. A fiery stubborn lady, like those ladies from your past, with problems,and struggles, with a voice against injustice, A protest made to last. Would you still love me If the little clown in me jumped off to be set free, If you saw beyond songbirds and fairies, Would you still love the scar engraved in me, I carry daily heartaches wherever I will be, Am I too much to handle Could you still love me? Would you still love me f I wasn't a poet in a magic world of verdant trees, If you faced my silly moods and my odd realities. Could you still love me? when the glow upon my face like a moon-jar wears a shadow, slowly sinks and fades. Would you still want me? When my noichette hair turns white as snow, my bones would become fragile, my wrinkles make me whole. Could you,still love me, When I become an old bore, If my hands shake and tremble, If I fail to remember, Could you care a little bit more? Could I curl within your arms Would you hold me by your side Could I find you in the stars on that cold and lonely night. Would you still love me If love was all I have All verses kept unwritten, All words were left unsaid,. Could you still love me If never in a lifetime A poet I would be Could you Iook into my heart Tell me what you see.
Not for the Contest, but thanyou Silent One,your title was inspiring to me,and so the many poems I've read about the topic.

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Date: 10/30/2023 11:29:00 AM
Welcome back Char. Loved it and the answer must be yes. Faved.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/14/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thnaks so much for reading and for your welcome.
Date: 10/16/2023 7:55:00 AM
A beautifully emotional write filled with thought provoking images.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2023 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much
Date: 10/12/2023 9:49:00 PM
Goodness Char...each stanza builds deeper and deeper into feminine truth... love it .. James
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/21/2023 8:34:00 AM
Thanks so muxh for reading
Date: 10/8/2023 1:57:00 PM
"Could you still love me? when the glow upon my face like a moon-jar wears a shadow, slowly sinks and fades." Beautiful imagery. Love needs not be asked, needs no affirmation but its presence. And poetry need not be written nor recited...but it must be lived!
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Date: 10/6/2023 12:42:00 PM
Wow...after reading the beauty and sincerity of your words, who would be so cold-hearted as to leave you in the lurch!! The simple island girl and poetess has much to offer. ~ Regards to you and yours :) // paul
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Date: 10/4/2023 6:39:00 AM
Absolutely, but I’m glad you are a poet. Your skills shine in this piece. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/1/2023 12:31:00 AM
Very beautiful poetry, I love this style of poetry.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/24/2024 2:49:00 PM
Annabelle?
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/3/2023 10:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Dear Alexis
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/3/2023 10:01:00 AM
Aysha..Sorry??
Date: 9/28/2023 3:31:00 PM
Oh the amazing things one would see looking in your heart of gold Charma, lovely patterns amazing flourishes, who could not love one such as you :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/3/2023 10:01:00 AM
Hi sweet lady.How lovely to see you again.Thanks so much for your kind words .
Date: 9/24/2023 12:30:00 PM
WoW! Charma, You are a remarkable poet and person. I'm sure your beloved would still love you no matter what. This gem was just beautiful and well-written. I've missed your talented pen and I'm elated that you are posting again. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:38:00 AM
Hi Alexis,so wonderful to see you're still here on Ps.Thanks so much for stopping by. my simple post..Truly grateful.Hppe you are doing fine.
Date: 9/21/2023 1:33:00 AM
- What a beautiful poem, Charma ... the sunrise and the sunset are always in your smile :) - hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:38:00 AM
Thanks so much sweet lady .
Date: 9/19/2023 10:36:00 AM
This is so beautiful it is going into a fav. Silent one also has beautiful poems. So well written and poses a question would you still love me for what I am. Awesome. love phyl
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:39:00 AM
Thanks so much ,greatly appreciated lovely lady
Date: 9/19/2023 3:54:00 AM
How lovely to see you back and posting your wonderful poetry here, Charmaine. I was just going to say good luck in the contest, however, I see you are not entering. I adore these lines... Would you still love me If I wasn't a poet? If I was not a climbing jasmine on your window-sill, a rose-bud in bloom, the soft zephyr breeze on an early afternoon. Love and Hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:40:00 AM
Hi Dear Maria,trying to return on PS..Thanks so much for reading, for your encouragement and support..Big Hugs.
Date: 9/14/2023 12:50:00 PM
I see your pen still sparkles in this very beautifully painted piece
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:40:00 AM
Thanks Liam,thanks for reading and for your encouragement. Trying to find my feet back here at the soup family.
Date: 9/13/2023 2:16:00 PM
A trophy winner, Charmaine. I shall treasure your beautiful Lyrical poetry by faving. I do agree with Ink Empress, this could be my favorite ballad, I would memorize the chorus and sing it all day! ;D Romantic and smacks true. xhugs~. Anaya
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:41:00 AM
Aw..Thanks so much sweet lady.Looking forward to reading you too.
Date: 9/12/2023 10:00:00 PM
If all mermaids vanished, and i am nothing but a simple island girl, those lines resonate with me as i too am an island girl. I love the opening lines in this so much , jasmine line and how you said “sunrise in your day” “ sunset in your smile “ truly you are so poetic. U call yr poems simple, but i say its evocative touching n creative. This sounds like a beautiful song. Silent one inspires many. And u wrote very well for his prompt. This is one of the best iv read for his prompt. Keep shining
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:43:00 AM
Thanks so much sweet lady,thanks for your support.So happy to meet another island girl on this site..Looking forward to read more of your poems.
Date: 9/12/2023 5:34:00 PM
We all have many different sides and it would be a sin to not love them all.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:43:00 AM
So very true,and thanks so much for reading
Date: 9/12/2023 3:47:00 PM
Wonderfully expressive poem, Charmaine. Your quest for answers are in your heart that that wrote this poem so beautifully. Love that is true will always be there.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/28/2023 12:44:00 AM
Thanks so very much .Your comment is greatly appreciated.
Date: 9/12/2023 1:13:00 PM
You always do so well with romantic and wistful poetry, Charma. This is certainly no exception. I guess this contest closed out?? but did it get judged? I can't even remember. it would have been a top winner, that's for sure.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/12/2023 3:08:00 PM
Yes it closed Dear Andrea..I just liked the title and the poems I was reading,thought to write a poem about it,but for the fun of it ,not for the Contest. Thanks for your lovely comment. Xx
Date: 9/12/2023 5:51:00 AM
I would still luv you if you had the beard ;) And yes, I've missed you! And now, you treat us with your bubbling thoughts! How happy i am! And how'z your princess precious woman? Noah iz 6'4" and twenty yearz old now....yikes....and he still loves hiz poppa! With regard this write uv your's dear 'poet'...you'll pass unto paradise with the crown of the poetess ;),,,have a wonderful season girlie....much love, james
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James Peranteau
Date: 9/17/2023 5:06:00 PM
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/12/2023 6:50:00 AM
Hi James,now the soup is feeling like family again,with all uncles and aunts gathering for a re-union.Oh Noah is 20,and so tall..Awesome.Time passes by so quickly.Christina is now 11. So glad to see you are still here on PS.I will visit your beautiful poetry shortly.Big hugs for the little one who is not as little anymore,smiles.:)
Date: 9/11/2023 8:21:00 PM
Charmaine, welcome back. And what a beautiful and romantic poem. People will love you for who are. Poet or not. :)
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/11/2023 11:11:00 PM
That's so very sweet of you..Thanks for your kind comment.Thanks for reading. : )
Date: 9/11/2023 7:36:00 PM
Wonderful, the answer must be, how could one not! And as far as your comment to Tom - the fire only adds to the passion! You've given EB Browning a run for her money...
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/11/2023 11:09:00 PM
Hehe .You always put a smile on my face Craig ..Oh a passionate dragon..Go tell my husband that...Lol...Anyways I'm not good at keeping grudges for too long with anyone...but Yes...I have the Fiery side too ..Thanks for reading Craig.: )
Date: 9/11/2023 6:08:00 PM
Yep. It's you, right? Enough and more for me. Your describing true love sans BS. A lovely yearning to be sure, CC. :-))
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/11/2023 11:07:00 PM
It is me... : ).Sans BS. Thanks so much for reading A.P.
Date: 9/11/2023 2:54:00 PM
You bragging.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/11/2023 11:06:00 PM
Hehe..I'm a woman,so it's a must to brag..Thanks for reading : )
Date: 9/11/2023 12:54:00 PM
I am sure your husband would still love you even if you were not a poet.. Thank you for writing on my prompt.. IT is very romantic, a theme you do very well.. so many lovely lines asking your beloved if they will still love your once you have changed and aged...
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/11/2023 1:22:00 PM
He would love me more I guess.He isn't a fan of poetry,but it's ok..Thanks for reading S.O,and for the intriguing title you pick for contents.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/11/2023 1:22:00 PM
Contests...*
Date: 9/11/2023 10:37:00 AM
Charmaine, your poem is an absolute treasure trove of beauty. Every word flows effortlessly, creating a symphony of emotions. The imagery you have woven is so exquisitely vivid, that it feels like stepping into a vibrant painting. The rhymes in your poem are like sparkling jewels, adding an extra layer of enchantment. Overall, your work is a stunning masterpiece that captivates the senses and leaves the reader in awe
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/11/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much for reading and for your comment Sotto.
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