Worms

Dedicated to David Meade The Haiku Master Worms have real bad luck Always getting hooked on things Sounds fishy to me © Jack Ellison 2014

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 12/13/2014 9:10:00 AM

Jack grand "fishy" treat. Yes David is a master indeed..natural poet.Love Jack..rajat

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/13/2014 9:21:00 AM

He's the Haiku master alright!!! Thanks for dropping by my friend! Cheers, Jack

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/24/2014 11:37:00 AM

Around here you don't want to dangle worms around the Trolls... The worms never make it to the lake. The trolls play with them and spice up their food by adding them... But don't worry Cathie...they take them out before eating...Their spiced up food. Apparently, worm poop is a delicacy... So no worms were hurt in the making of this... YUCKY tho it is... Hey! If you mentioned farting... then I can mention worm poop! LOL... Bet I got you on that one!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/24/2014 2:39:00 PM

"worm poop is a delicacy"???? If you say so! XXXX

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/24/2014 4:04:00 AM

So true dear, Jack and so funny! Wonderful Haiku! I am certain, David would agree!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/24/2014 8:31:00 AM

A venture out of my comfort zone! LOL

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/23/2014 8:56:00 PM

Hello Jack!Excellent haiku dedicated to Dave, my dear friend. A 7 for me! Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/23/2014 9:03:00 PM

Dearest friend Dorian... you give me nothing but 7s! You are such a sweetie! Big smackeroonies to you... love and hugs, Jack XXX

Eve Roper

Date: 11/23/2014 8:42:00 PM

Ha, ha... good haiku, Jack. :) eve

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/23/2014 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Eve! I USUALLY write only narratives but David Meade, the Haiku Master has inspired me!!! Love and hugs XXX