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The ancient elders speak in spirit cries
silent,hushed,songs of the meek
a call for the chosen.......

Persian waters' flow
in hymns of silver cashmere
questions dissipate
as I rest at waters' edge
in love, the Great Spirit leads.......


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Contest- A Mesh Of Forms

Kimo/Tanka

Poet-Rick Parise

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The ancient elders speak in spirit cries silent,hushed,songs of the meek a call for the chosen....... Persian waters' flow in light of silver cashmere questions dissipate as I rest at waters' edge in love, the Great Spirit leads....... _____________________________________ Contest- A Mesh Of Forms Kimo/Tanka Poet-Rick Parise

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Date: 4/11/2012 6:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:53:00 PM
Rick, congrats on your win with this lovely mesh of forms. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:16:00 AM
Rick, congratulations with your win;-) Always~ PD
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Date: 4/9/2012 8:22:00 PM
I like the tone of this poem, somehow relaxing, serene, peaceful. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/9/2012 7:14:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Congratulatiions on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/9/2012 8:59:00 AM
congrats Rick on a superb win for this eloquent mesh of forms luv.. trust u enjoyed a lovely Easter day in Resurrection Power..
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Date: 3/21/2012 9:31:00 AM
Lovely poem Rick and good luck in the contest. Thanks for the info I guess I never thought about it timing out. love phyl
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Date: 3/20/2012 7:53:00 PM
this is so poetic, Rick. It even looks like it would work in the glowing words contest!!
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