Words 'Modern Cinquain'

Words Your Voice Sounds coming forth A joy to hear Speech

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/29/2012 10:15:00 AM

Sometimes that is all we need to get through a day! Light & Love

Andrew Rymill

Date: 5/10/2012 2:39:00 PM

Carol great Cinquan ....

Chuck Novotny

Date: 3/31/2012 12:49:00 AM

The "dulcid tones" of a loved one's voice ring bells of joy in the soul. Great piece Carol. - Chuck

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/12/2012 8:46:00 AM

I know. I hear my husband's voice and no matter where I am, I know I am home. I also appreciate being able to hear, in general, and all of the amazing words and sounds that life holds. it is truly " a joy to hear" :)

Duncan Chappell

Date: 3/12/2012 7:56:00 AM

everything so sweet kiss dear carol ,duncan ,ceizar

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2012 3:18:00 PM

I think modern cinquain goes by words more than by syllable count? In any event, NICELY done. The joy of hearing a dear one speak!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/9/2012 12:32:00 PM

Interesting form, so is this a 1/2/4/4/1 syllable count? Just curious! Your write really spoke to me! I thoroughly enjoyed your entire poem a lot! And your voice Carol, your written voice, is always "a joy to hear"! I really loved your clever poem that you have written! Great Work!!

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 3/9/2012 4:17:00 PM

I soup mailed you the answer Russell.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/9/2012 9:20:00 AM

Another enjoyable piece Carol. Have a great day. love phyl