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Woodland Hideaway

Tranquility’s quintessence here resides amidst the wild flowers’ fragrant scent. And watching us, a timid rabbit hides behind those shrubs where we have pitched the tent. The streams of light from splendid sun we see are gilded tendrils falling, cutting through sweet smelling needles on each verdant tree. We breathe in pine while relishing this view. Suddenly - the warbling of a bird dulcetly disrupts the quietude. The sound is not like one I’ve ever heard. Mellifluous, it does not break the mood. We linger in this woodland hideaway- blissful- as dusk swallows up the day. Sonnet Form with rhyme scheme: abab, cdcd, efef, gg

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/14/2020 8:33:00 PM
Another gorgeous sonnet of beautifully depicted nature, this time with trees, birds, and a timid rabbit. I love it - so blissful! (p.s. another example of those early days where you counted wild as two syllables)
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Date: 7/27/2016 2:03:00 AM
Congrats Andrea, for your placement with this splendid piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/26/2016 12:22:00 PM
I see you went with an older post too Andrea...a very lovely one! Congratulations on your third placement! My daughter comes home today, but I will still have my granddaughter until her day off, Thursday That will be 9 days. I just can't spend much time here at PS while watching her. I hope you are doing well. Love, Connie
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Date: 7/26/2016 9:23:00 AM
What a serene hideaway, beautiful imagery speckled through. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2016 8:09:00 PM
Andrea, an awesome sonnet lady, should have placed higher...be blessed :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:53:00 PM
Andrea,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/27/2012 1:20:00 AM
ANDREA,, WOW.. AMAZING..., CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful win * hugs ;-)~p.d
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Date: 1/24/2012 3:29:00 AM
congrats Andrea:) !
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Date: 1/23/2012 6:55:00 PM
congrats Andrea on a sensational win for this impressive poetry luv.. u have soup mail too..
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Date: 1/23/2012 2:45:00 PM
What a splendid hideaway !! Enjoyed the scenery through your words. Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 1/23/2012 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's latest contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 11:54:00 AM
Congrats on HM in contest......Luv/Best wishes...........Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/25/2010 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your HM in Frank's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2010 3:52:00 AM
congrats on winning HM in contest ..... luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/22/2010 9:43:00 PM
Such a serene poem. Loved it. many congratulations friend on this win.
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Date: 10/22/2010 6:40:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one, Andrea :)-- you sure captured so much here-- congrats for being in the winners' circle-- hugs to you :)
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Date: 10/21/2010 5:22:00 PM
Lovely scene, great win. And well done sonnet! Light & Love
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Date: 10/21/2010 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Andrea
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:56:00 PM
Sonnets seem to come so easy to you, Andrea, and are always wonderful. Another beauty, as blissful as the scene you have painted with your words! :)
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:36:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in Frank's contest with this super wonderful write.. enjoy your special honor tonight my friend with luv...
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:49:00 PM
This is very lovely. Beautiful sonnet. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/21/2010 1:11:00 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your success in Frank's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/21/2010 10:54:00 AM
Love the smell and sound of nature. I could read these type of poems all day. I guess you get that peaceful, tranquil feeling. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/11/2010 9:32:00 PM
hmmmm another poem giving me ideas lol sounds and smells smiles ... loved this one Andrea ... good luck in the comp and thank you for your always supportive comments they are appreciated love Jayne
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