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Pastels speckle the crispy ground,
gliding meloncholy spiraling down.
Pretzeled branch tickle the ivory dotted sky,
ducks meander Vee-shaped by.
chilled northern winds permeate,
Balmy sunshine will have to wait.
flowers abed crystal blanketed shawl,
Cultivation repeated must forestall.
White castles rise with foggy breath,
Winter akin symbolisim to death.
smooth glass cloak the water's still,
frozen in time with jackfrost chill.
Cheeks kissed with rosy hues,
Back to school with resignationed enthuse.
Hot coacoa steaming marshmellow fog,
Christmas laced with rummed eggnog.
Lovers encased await unwrapping,
Soon spring comes  gradually a-tapping.

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  1. Date: 9/14/2012 8:25:00 AM
    This is good.

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 5:53:00 PM
    So true the earth is a wonderland. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 8:03:00 PM
    Love your last line... unfortunately I must endure another Canadian winter first! LOL Love and hugs, Jack

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:34:00 PM
    Lisa,great inspiration.Keep it up.

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 8:50:00 AM
    Beautifully writen.

  1. Date: 9/3/2012 11:16:00 AM
    My favorite time of year, I caught a scent of such things on their way early sunday morning. Great poem, thanks. Read ;{>

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:49:00 AM
    just love your wonderland, Lisa

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 3:00:00 PM
    Hi DP great write about winter, i always look forward to the changing seasons so many colours to seee, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:54:00 PM
    Jack frost chill,loved the rhyme,the flow very smooth,oxox great write Lisa

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Very awesome and descriptive! I could see everything clearly as the imagination flares! :D Always, Laura