Wives With Knives

Through and through though more to do- A thousand thoughts to misconstrue! Too long I've waited, too sad and sedated To live a lie I declare is true... And so it seems that in my dreams I bathe myself in Moonlight beams That light the night, turn black to white And will slit my throat at any means!

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/26/2013 8:52:00 AM

Chan The Man This is intense and very deep. You made the reader feel every emotion and pulled them in with every word. Nicely done Glad you enjoyed my Wishes poem. Thanks for the nice comment. HHHMMM Should I be afraid what you'd wish for. HEE HEE

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/26/2013 9:42:00 AM

lol Glad this poem affected you in that way; thanks for the review, sweet pea! :) <3

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/15/2013 11:06:00 PM

You do dark poetry really well. You remind me of a famous English poet. Well done and please put down that knife..lol.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/16/2013 8:52:00 AM

Dark is what I do best lol Thanks as always, Mustapha :)