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Wishing For Time

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For Line Gauthier's

'Bite Size Contest no 78' Poetry Contest

As dark turned to dawn, in bed with my love I lay, wishing for time to stop. . . so in his arms I might stay.

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Silent One

Date: 12/17/2023 5:24:00 AM

Congrats on your bitesize win!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 12/16/2023 8:56:00 PM

Brought such a smile to my lips as I read your wonderful words. I defy anyone to read this without the most tender picture of a loving caress coming into their mind. Andrea you just told a beautiful love story in twenty four words. So well done sweet poet.

Kash Poet

Date: 10/17/2012 2:28:00 AM

Where is your Angel Dust poem for Gail's contest?

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/8/2012 10:39:00 PM

So nice, wish my husband didn't have to work so many nites, I miss that. Lee

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/8/2012 4:23:00 PM

Yes what a heavenly place to snuggle into. Wishing the moment will not stop. Love this couplet Andrea. love phyl

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/7/2012 11:06:00 AM

Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2012 7:48:00 AM

A belated thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Andrea. Love, Carol

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 9/7/2012 5:16:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2012 7:30:00 PM

ANDREA, congratulations, with your awesome couplets in Susan's "Time - single rhyming couplet contest " I really am enjoying many of her winners... good night~PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/5/2012 5:47:00 PM

So sweet and romantic! Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 9/5/2012 2:31:00 PM

Love this romantic couplet, Andrea! Congrats on your win and happy birthday...:))

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/5/2012 7:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Time" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/4/2012 10:37:00 PM

daintily sweet, andie... your take on the theme is unique... congrats with huggs! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/4/2012 5:41:00 AM

I would also wish for time to stop Andrea :) this one made me smile. We have a little more sunshine over here in Cape Town today.. btw there is a few I wrote earlier in this year that you haven't read yet. I can't even remember what inspired that secret. lol I am on lunch at work at the moment.. Half way through the day :) enjoy your Tuesday, love Wilma

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/3/2012 9:55:00 AM

Sweet, sweet one. Wonderfully penned. Loved always, bl by giving good luck in the contest.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/31/2012 5:55:00 PM

Excellent and romantic piece! Always, Laura

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/31/2012 3:36:00 PM

You got good priorities Andrea - J.A.B. %

Karen Croft

Date: 8/30/2012 2:54:00 PM

sounds like what i wish for!! thanks for visiting

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/30/2012 11:03:00 AM

when you bloom, you really bloom, andie... you had me swooning here that i long for such jubilation of time slowly melting into a night of sweet love... wow!..:) huggs!

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/30/2012 9:30:00 AM

Yup...there should be a national stay-in-bed day for lovers. Having to get up from such a comfy spot makes the day's work seems more labored. A sweet Couplet, Andrea. Thanks for stopping by and comments made. With my husband it's very complecated...can't even understand it all myself. One love and God bless. Joy Wells

Len Gasun

Date: 8/30/2012 6:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Andrea for your reply. However, I can't open/read the blog. Is it ok with you if to resend the answer of my question is soupmail tomorrow? Thanks a lot!!!!!! luv, leonora

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 8/30/2012 4:36:00 AM

Yes, breathtaking- : ) Bren

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/29/2012 7:54:00 PM

Remarkable write and how we think so much alike my friend. Love this one! Hugs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/29/2012 8:38:00 AM

oh and thank you for dropping by my poem :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 8/29/2012 8:37:00 AM

Shucks--- this is a sweet and romantic write, Andrea! eep, speaking of wishing for time, I am sorry I will have to catch up on email tomorrow? Am trying to catch up on something now and am doing a wee bit of a peek and break! Hugs to you!! :D