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Winter's Spell

Now the arrival of a desolate kingdom so bleak Felt and suppressed not able to speak With the cold winds that blow Beneath a paradise of sparkling clad snow Nox has cloaked all with an attic embrace To what was tempered on this earthly space Hardened clay with fists of steel Crackling rivers that slept and concealed Howling cries of the lonesome and the scared No place for the living to dwell unprepared Lifeless beds of gardens fast asleep This place not fit for man nor beast And so a passing of time will endure and erase To the coming of spring taking in its place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/23/2009 2:01:00 PM
Dear Laura - I can't wait for Spring to get here! I am so over the winter in NYC so far. LOL! This poem really does paint the bleak, harsh realities (and beautiful splendor) of the chilly months but also inspires us for what's around the corner in March. Wishing you all the best. Peace and hugs, J.
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:18:00 PM
such a beautiful write that paints a vivid picture in my mind, elegant write, i hope that you are well, take care D-nyce
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Date: 1/22/2009 8:06:00 AM
Hi laura, At the moment, I am caught in the spell of winter and it is snapping cold. Grat wirte! Thanks for sharing love, Lainie
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Date: 1/21/2009 12:56:00 AM
Great write...Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah
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Date: 1/18/2009 10:07:00 AM
Awesome write, Laura! Your imagery is vivid and chilling as I was lost in the spell your words create. The end is perfect and full of the hope that springs coming brings us. Well penned! Love, Robin
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Date: 1/18/2009 9:16:00 AM
I too can't wait for the seasons to change. Both naturally and spiritually too. It is cold here to but with God the Sun will shine again. Great write and Continue to share. "Compassion for Mary" is hanging here right next to my desk..written in 2007. Continue to share
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Date: 1/16/2009 5:26:00 AM
And I can't wait for spring! Terrific rhyme and the couplet form is perfect! A wonderful read. Michael
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Date: 1/16/2009 4:33:00 AM
Wow, this really makes me long for Spring! It is definitely an unusually freezing and bleak winter. Awesome write Laura. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/15/2009 5:57:00 PM
brrrrrrrrrr Light & Love debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/15/2009 5:49:00 PM
Nice imaagery and great work...Raul
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