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Winter's Blanket

Away from busy streets are nature’s reservoirs - beds of ground which by November have gone brown. Beneath a canopy of sparkling stars they’ll lie in peace when winter lays its velvet blanket down. November’s earthen beds, once fields of green, await the thick white quilt that flakes from sky will bring. How beautiful they’ll shine in moonlight. How pristine - until their blanket is removed by warmth of spring! Written 11/10/12 by Andrea Dietrich for Gail Angel Doyle's "Winter's Blanket" Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/5/2013 4:20:00 PM
Wow, Beautiful poem and a marvelous win. I think that it is awesome that you can write for a specific contest. That takes genuine talent. Great write!
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Date: 12/4/2012 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail Angel's "Winter's Blanket" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2012 8:39:00 AM
Hi my dear..a big congrats on this lovely poem being a winner. BG
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:30:00 AM
Congratulations on this wonderful write Andy , like it when i first read it and still do xx
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Date: 11/30/2012 12:48:00 AM
Many congrats for this wonderful win Andrea.
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:49:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations with your "winter's blanket" poem. A very Good and comforting image in Gail's contest. Goodnight~ always~ PD
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:35:00 PM
How did I miss this one? Beautiful write! Congrats on the win!
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Date: 11/29/2012 7:01:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 11/29/2012 6:55:00 PM
You got robbed ;) very special Andie more real than most others...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Connie
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:32:00 PM
Nicely done Andrea. Congratulations on your win. I am slowly back. I was ill over Thanksgiving. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:17:00 PM
Awesome work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/25/2012 1:08:00 AM
I think this is a beautiful poem. I like to write poems that rhyme also. I can imagine the scenes of your descriptions. Paml
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Date: 11/20/2012 5:14:00 PM
Nicely done and yes that blanket of white is all around. love phyl
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:51:00 PM
beautiful and very original write, my friend. Did I say Congrats on your wins ?
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Date: 11/15/2012 3:50:00 PM
Flake by flake, they'll melt away. Down the river this spring to play. Among the meadows so soft and lush. To bring life color in earths young blush. Have a nice winter Andrea, hope you like to ski or snowmobile or, well just have a nice winter. :)
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Date: 11/13/2012 9:59:00 PM
LOVELY VISIONS INTERTWINE IN YOUR WINTER BLANKET ANDREA .. TREMENDOUD VIEW WITH VOCAB USED LUV .. WINNING WISHES TO U .. I AM SUPER FRUSTRATED WITH TPS .. STILL HAVING LOADS OF TROUBLE COMMENTING TO POETS AS I CANNOT VIEW THEIR LISTS MOST TIMES .. TPS DOES NOT SEEM TO BE INTERESTED IN FIXING .. SI PLEASE KNOW I AM TRYING TO ENJOY AND COMMENT ON POETS WORK ..BUT ULTRA DIFFICULT NOW ..OH.
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Date: 11/13/2012 12:10:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 11/13/2012 10:28:00 AM
"How beautiful they'll shine in moonlight." Makes the whole piece. I want to curl up in a blanket when I think of winter. Brrrrr! Love, daver
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Date: 11/12/2012 9:12:00 PM
Lovely. It's a mellow, uplifting piece. I'm certain you'll do well.
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Date: 11/12/2012 4:40:00 PM
nicely penned Andrea....winning wishes...love
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Date: 11/12/2012 2:50:00 PM
Hi Andrea, boy what a brilliant image this evokes, great write. Rollo
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Date: 11/12/2012 2:19:00 PM
wow, I love this beauty, Andrea - a big winner here for sure. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 11/12/2012 11:32:00 AM
This is the epitome of beauty my friend! I am in awe of the gorgeousness of this incredibly awesome poem! What a delightful and most pleasant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/12/2012 10:52:00 AM
This is lovely and paints a great picture Andy I see the Yorkshire moors which are ablaze with all the colours in spring but an expanse of pure white in the winter. xx
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