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Soft scintillating snowflakes dress the naked tree branches with a white wintery wrap until spring arrives (wintery can be spelled 2 ways - this version is three syllables) Contest: Winter Dodoitsu Sponsor Heather Ober 11~08~15

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Date: 11/19/2015 5:34:00 PM

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Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2015 5:35:00 PM

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Thanks Sara:-) hugs jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/17/2015 6:38:00 AM

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dropping back to say congrats, i know i read and liked this one before, glad to see a win for it! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2015 11:41:00 AM

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Thanks Charlotte I do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/14/2015 7:48:00 AM

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Jan, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2015 7:52:00 AM

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Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/13/2015 11:40:00 PM

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Congratulations Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2015 4:53:00 AM

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Thanks so much Michael:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/13/2015 9:36:00 PM

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Beautiful! Congratulation on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2015 4:52:00 AM

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Thanks so much Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/13/2015 8:29:00 PM

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A beautiful image, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2015 4:52:00 AM

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Thanks so much Kim it was a lovely contest to write for:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/13/2015 7:58:00 PM

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Beautiful Jan...big congrats :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/14/2015 4:52:00 AM

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Thanks so much David:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/13/2015 3:20:00 PM

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Congrats on your win, Jsn! Great poem :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2015 3:33:00 PM

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Thanks Laura:-) hugs jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/13/2015 3:06:00 PM

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I love these short poems, and yours is a beauty. congrats. BG

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2015 3:15:00 PM

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Thanks so much Barbara - it was a lovely challenge:-) hugs jan xx

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 11/11/2015 3:02:00 PM

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Beautiful, you still managed 'dodo' in the poem :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/11/2015 3:07:00 PM

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Thank you so much for your support Etienne I do appreciate your lovely comments:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 11/10/2015 9:20:00 PM

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I like this a lot Jan. Very nice write.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/11/2015 4:24:00 AM

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Thanks James:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 11/10/2015 2:39:00 PM

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I love this! Good luck in the contest, definitely a winner :) Be blessed -LU xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2015 2:43:00 PM

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Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 11/9/2015 5:27:00 PM

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Outstanding imagery, Jan. It's amazing how a whole scene can come to life with just so few words! All the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 5:30:00 PM

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Thanks Sandra I think many of us are going for similar imagery I have seen some lovely poems but your 'boa' is my favourite so far:-) hugs jan xx

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/9/2015 7:33:00 AM

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Impressive images, so serene, so white. Lovely.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 7:47:00 AM

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Thanks Scott:-) hugs Jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/9/2015 5:09:00 AM

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Mesmerizing dream of winter, dear Jan! A seven and good luck!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 7:47:00 AM

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Thanks as ever Demetrios - I owe you a big thank you - my mosquito poem got poem of the week - I thanks to you I now know the little monsters who devour us are female lol:-) Hugs jan x

Date: 11/9/2015 2:23:00 AM

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This quite beautiful and has great imagery. You're really one very gifted woman with a well trained mind and pen. Always a treasure and pleasure to read your beauty of poetry. light, love and live... Big Hugs Theresa

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 7:45:00 AM

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You are too kind my friend I still consider myself to be very much a fledgling writer -I'm just having great fun learning:-) hugs jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/9/2015 1:15:00 AM

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I love the imagery this depicted JAN. Your write is beautiful and brilliant. Great write..................A.M.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 7:44:00 AM

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Thanks Afolabi:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 11/9/2015 12:30:00 AM

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Well hello there Jan, what a splendid poem to read on my return here!!!! Hugs! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 1:15:00 AM

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Have missed you my friend:-) the images of Paris look wonderful what fabulous autumnal colours:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/8/2015 7:12:00 PM

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...even winter needs to be tucked in and hugged before going to sleep...this is a nice gentle goodnight kiss in the cold.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 1:14:00 AM

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Thanks so much John:-) hugs jan xx

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/8/2015 5:29:00 PM

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very pretty image of snowflakes dressing the trees, and nice alliteration, too! i like snow, but all we usually get in winter is fifty shades of grey! lol good luck in the contest :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2015 1:13:00 AM

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LOL Charlotte good old British weather:-) hugs jan I LOVED your poem so much i simply didn't know what to say but WOW:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/8/2015 4:19:00 PM

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Splendid Composition. Wish you best For Contest. Anisha D

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 4:20:00 PM

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Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/8/2015 2:14:00 PM

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Beautiful imagery Jan love your write. An excellent entry for the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 2:20:00 PM

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Thanks Michael :-) hugs jan xx

Date: 11/8/2015 12:13:00 PM

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Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Nicely put, well written with poetic skill and style. Emile.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 12:14:00 PM

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Thanks Emile my muse has let me down recently I am hoping she will return now:-) hugs Jan xx

Date: 11/8/2015 8:54:00 AM

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A beauty of a write, Jan. 7. All the best in the contest. PS. I hope you're feeling better. hugs!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2015 10:25:00 AM

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oh my word Kim I had no idea lol that is SUCH good news:-) hugs Jan xx

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