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Winter-Claws

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Winter-Claws


winter-claws clutch tiny seed in her womb
her den ,a bare four- walled shed- 
sap freezes ,life stiffens..

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  1. Date: 2/13/2013 6:40:00 AM
    Powerful...

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/14/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you..
  1. Date: 2/13/2013 3:13:00 AM
    Simply beautiful! In Spring life returns: Rejoice!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/14/2013 11:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you , glad you liked it...
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 10:48:00 PM
    oh my how sad this is. The title is really good for it!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/14/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Andrea,...but life and death are inseparable...
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 7:09:00 PM
    Thanks for reading my writes, I have enjoyed yours this evening. Light & love

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/14/2013 11:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Debbie...
  1. Date: 2/12/2013 11:56:00 AM
    Very descriptive of what can happen in winter..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Your visits are always encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 2/12/2013 3:40:00 AM
    This is yet another awesome write, and great entry into Rick's contest! You are on a roll with these contests Mehnaz! This one is exceptional, I love reading this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful piece, quite the enlightening poem, Great Work!!

    Veetil Avatar Mehnaz Veetil
    Date: 2/14/2013 11:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Russell...