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Winner

At the beach in your bikini blowing off those also-rans you posture in your playful way with Gucci sunshades and the latest Grisham novel. At the gala you're exquisite in your slinky cocktail dress. Simple, black, short and sexy, you shimmer like a morning mist, the chandeliers are dancing in your eyes. At the condo in your nightgown, (the antithesis of sex), tucking in the kids and softly singing them to sleep, you're Wonder Woman in your plastic curlers. I know I have the best, without a doubt, it's true, whatever outfit you put on, my 'winner' still is you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/7/2012 9:06:00 PM
It is wonderful when you can look at someone all hours of the day and know that you have one lucky, lovely lady in your life. Lucky you. Thanks for your soup mail. love phyl
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Date: 7/7/2012 5:28:00 PM
absolutely charming! i love the different items of clothing chosen in each verse - very clever! the ending is delightful - you have one lucky lady!
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Date: 7/7/2012 5:12:00 PM
So cute & sweet keith..
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Date: 7/7/2012 4:59:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Keith. It's so sweet how you ended it. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/7/2012 12:34:00 PM
‡ Yesss, From The Descriptions Painting Her Lovely Beauty Then I Would Also Say, You Are A Winner * Sooo Beautiful, Luv, Rachel ‡
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Date: 7/7/2012 12:13:00 PM
Beautiful write on "her".Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:35:00 AM
awe this brought such a sweet tear to my eye! You sweet man you lol!
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