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Window To the Future

There was a time I can attest A window to the future Joy was there As many others Happiness came as her tutor As we jumped In and out Our hearts all a flutter What did we find But the trappings of time We had landed betwixt each other

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/24/2013 7:39:00 AM
Deep and thought provoking a good lesson to the young!
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Zoria Gregory
Date: 10/24/2013 7:51:00 AM
Good day! Can the morning start any better than with a wonderful comment. Thank you for taking the time....much appreciated! Z
Date: 9/29/2013 4:20:00 PM
this is so interesting. I really enjoyed it.
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Zoria Gregory
Date: 9/29/2013 4:51:00 PM
Thanks so very much for reading!
Date: 6/24/2013 3:46:00 PM
Great poem! Love "betwixt"!
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Zoria Gregory
Date: 6/24/2013 3:56:00 PM
April, thank you so much...I laughed as I re-read it; I get a visual and then laugh again. You're very kind to comment! Z

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