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Wild Ducks Fly

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Wild Ducks Fly

Wild  ducks  fly  over  a  pond ,  images in  the  water.
Preened  figures  fade  from  mirror, light  fades from long grass; if  they be

Narcissus, may descend  to  admire  their  own  glossy  green  plumes.


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  1. Date: 3/26/2012 6:22:00 AM
    Good morning Gautami, a beautiful. Image I like the way you posted your poem..a wonderful ponds reflection... enjoyed, have yourself a wonderful day~luv*PD :-)

  1. Date: 5/6/2011 7:50:00 AM
    Wonderful imagery Gautami, love it. Have a wonderful weekend....:)

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 2:03:00 PM
    You write much about nature. Do you like near a beautiful pond or lake? Enjoyed this write. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 2:18:00 AM
    You paint a perfect picture here! ~JSLambert

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 3:00:00 PM
    Nice one, Gautami. but they are not Narcissus and may not know their great beauty!

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 9:54:00 PM
    Great imagery here.Love it---kashinath

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 6:06:00 PM
    OOOOhhhh so beautiful is this Gautami....simple and yet quite remarkable! :)

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 12:32:00 PM
    Deep and meaningful with great images, gautami