Whos Watching

A lone rabbit sits on ice-laden ground, watching… but, who’s watching him?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2015 6:02:00 PM

This could easily be a questionku. I like how you told this story.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/26/2015 6:07:00 PM

Thank you Richard.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 11:40:00 AM

a brilliant haiku, M.L., after reading this haiku. I'm the one watching him, through this amazing imagery... Hum, I picture the bunny noticing me now... LOL.. Kidding... Love this...LINDA

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/16/2015 8:30:00 AM

I love it that you can picture him and appreciate your reading and commenting.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 1/10/2015 3:09:00 AM

Hohoho. Very nice, Who's watching him? A poet....Best wishes to you.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/13/2015 8:28:00 PM

Definitely, my cat and I were and I suspect the local Cooper's Hawk. Many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2015 2:02:00 PM

a nice little portrait of a rabbit unaware that you are watching HIM!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/8/2015 5:59:00 PM

I am afraid that I wasn't the only one...thank you.

James Fraser

Date: 1/8/2015 11:38:00 AM

I've been taken straight to a David Attenborough Wildlife program. Instant visual after reading your words, nice - James :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/8/2015 6:00:00 PM

That's quite a comment, James. Thank you so much; I'm glad that you were transported.

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/8/2015 10:25:00 AM

Hi, M.L., your Haiku presents a picture of nature where survival is so difficult for sure, and your little rabbit is so vulnerable. Survival of the fittest in the animal kingdom rules, and it's hard to accept this sometimes. Hugs, Sandra

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/8/2015 6:00:00 PM

So true...life is not easy for anyone, including rabbits. Thank you for visiting.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/8/2015 5:49:00 AM

Well, a well written, Haiku, dear M.L.K., that resembles a riddle! Innumerable subjects may be watching but the chief among them, I think, is the rabbit's nature!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/8/2015 6:01:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios; I always appreciate your comments.