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Who Will Be Then Criminal

what is seen what is felt inner environment evolves in mind then do to go ahead on with external carries if beneficial otherwise stops steps there from self judgement of selfishness talks sensation sparks in organs stubborn instructions compel to be lived with that feedback of negative actions if realized in advance with positively trained mind who will be then criminal?

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 8/22/2016 6:44:00 PM

This is a head buzz, BL; with the brain held by a pendulum state. Could a lion be called a criminal when she tries to protect her cubs from a pack of hyenas? When they laugh hysterically, will she stand by stupidly, or should she roar to chase them off? Believe me, no one is more fed up than myself.:( Best wishes, Mikki

Michelle Mac Donald
Date: 8/23/2016 6:39:00 PM

Sound advice, thank you for your thoughts of wisdom.:)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/23/2016 10:42:00 AM

Harmful activity will come to an end if all the people are trained with positive and constructive education and realize the feedback in advance before doing any harmful act. Bad instincts evolve from seeing the negative activity in family and society as the organs are like blotting paper adsorbs the mind where mind gradually becomes stubborn and self being becomes unable to control himself. That can be stopped through training of doing welfare with love. Thanks for your comment my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2016 11:39:00 AM

- Great written dear Bl, with an important question in the end - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2016 12:55:00 PM

Thanks my lovely lovely friend for your appreciation. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/20/2016 3:21:00 PM

Philosophical thoughts with each word carefully chosen for the most impact. I love your "thinking pieces" written with such heart, your words linger long after..a true sign of exceptional talent.:-) A profound read, most enjoyable, with return readings assured..A 7+ :-) blessings, lynn

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2016 8:36:00 AM

Thanks for your high appreciation and 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/20/2016 1:57:00 PM

Esoteric profound writing that provokes the mind! Excellently done my friend, Cloudy Poet! A 7!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/21/2016 8:35:00 AM

Thanks for your nice appreciation and 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl