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Who Is the Conqueror

You are the conqueror, you always conquer on your fingernail seats the victory home in your head dwells all tactics for halting for bending for cutting for slaying the truthful mouth yes, with lies the power you can do you can undo a giant lion that shuts lion in the glade a giant prey that makes prey walk on the ground when its hover above the earth a giant fish they runs fish a distance length yes, you can do you can undo what you step upon none dare moves close it. you are a evil yourself evil is you himself what suffers others laughs you hysterically you the fear that fears the fear you the fear that fears yourself who dare faces you and says you do right none perhaps one that wants to lick the cup of life one that wants to live beneath the soil 'I winder do you at times wonder I am really the conqueror' 'yes' do you do and say I have done? do you publicize your scheme? do you kill and say I have killed? can you kill truth in people's heart? who is the conqueror?

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Date: 4/6/2017 10:55:00 PM
Deep insights ... Enjoyed reading ...
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Date: 4/4/2017 2:58:00 PM
Those who conquer and kill feelings of love are showing the inside of their own dark hearts. Truth always prevails in the end, Afolabi. A touching verse that explores the pain false loves can create.
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Date: 4/4/2017 7:21:00 AM
Profound and provoking my friend, Afolabi! Enjoyed!
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Date: 4/4/2017 2:50:00 AM
Excellent. The emotion and imagery are penned well. Thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 4/4/2017 2:06:00 AM
A very thought provoking write! Well done.
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Date: 4/4/2017 1:39:00 AM
ur words inspire me. making me inspire, perspire and aspire for the zenith. thank u sir. i love also, the poem u wrote on nepa's electricity. kudos my 9ja poetic ninja. keep the flag flying.
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Date: 4/3/2017 4:51:00 PM
Your impressive style comes to the fore in this poem, Afolabi. With your probing questions you manage to get the reader musing. The correct answer is not hard to find! Regards // paul
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Date: 4/3/2017 12:19:00 PM
The emotion and imagery are perfect. I felt the words as well as read them and they are powerful, Great Job! Emile.
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Date: 4/3/2017 8:00:00 AM
I am but one who will be impressed with this wondrous write. Your words a phrasing have a unique quality and substance. 7 all the way!
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