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Who Is He

WHO IS HE? We walk out of the movie theater, holding hands laughing about the movie we just saw and what we would be getting into later on in the night. We talk and fantasize about the possibilities of our life together you know the what if’s of the first date. We get down the block and He walks towards us and my heart stops. There is a look on my face that no one could ever describe. As he approaches us he looks at me, says Hi, and keeps walking with a big smile on his face as if he wasn’t walking with another woman himself. Well my date naturally says what’s up to him like any normal man would do and turns to me and asks Who is He? The question Who is He? Stirs so many thoughts in me. I think about who he is and I say to myself, He is the man that blackened my eye. He is the man that slapped me because I burnt the breakfast. He is the man that kicked me in the stomach and made me lose our baby. He is the man my mother told me wasn’t the one and I didn’t listen. He is the reason that all of those women called my phone day in and day out looking for their man. He is the reason all of those women wanted to fight me for messing with their man. He is the reason His mother doesn’t like me. I ask myself one more time Who is He? and I think He is, He is, He is, the reason that I am on this date right now. So I look at my date, and he looks at me, and I look at my date and he looks at me, and I casually say, Nobody. ©2014 by Navi J.

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Date: 7/25/2016 1:49:00 AM
NAVI, enjoyed reading your poem today. ,Thank you for sharing your words. Hope to see you post again.... *SKAT*
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Date: 4/17/2014 12:24:00 PM
I WOULD LIKE TO THANK ALL OF YOU FOR ALL OF YOUR KIND WORDS!! I LOVE IT HERE AT POETRYSOUP. I LOVE EXPRESSING MYSELF THROUGH THE ART OF WRITING.. GOOD TO BE AMONGST FRIENDS :-) I WILL BE POSTING ALOT MORE HERE!!
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Date: 4/16/2014 5:39:00 PM
Navi, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/16/2014 8:49:00 AM
Very Powerful...I feel every emotion in this write as if I was there along with you. Please post more! I don't take too kind to abuse in any manner. I'd arrest him in a heart-beat if he was down here in Texas. ;)
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Date: 4/14/2014 8:42:00 PM
Hi Navi, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/14/2014 12:47:00 PM
Thank you very much!! So good to have somewhere to come to where your words and thought are appreciated as well as understood.
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Date: 4/14/2014 3:42:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Navi :) - I choose your first good written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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