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Whipping the Weep

BLUNDERS SO SAY WHEN CONFRONTED BY THEM DIFFERENT NAMES, SAME MEANINGS PEOPLE OF THE NIGHT, COLD BLOODED BEIGN AS THEIR NAME IMPLY PERCHANCE APPEARS IN THE DAY IF CHANCE PERMITS FORCING THEM TO SUCCUMB TO THEIR PRESSURE ‘COS HOLDING IN HANDS METALS OF DESTRUCTION THOU FINISH UP IN A SECONDS AK 47 RIFLES FOUND WITH THEM JACKNIFES, CUTLASSES GLITTERING IN THEIR HANDS BLITTERING LIKE GALAXY OF STARS WHEN NEMESIS HIT THEM TURN AND TIE TO THE DRUM OR POSSIBLY SET ABLAZE PERCHANCE GAOLED TENS YEARS FOLKS SEEING THEM WEEPING HOT IF GOT TOLD THEY ARE HOODLUMS THEY HEREBY WHIP THE WEEP…

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Date: 3/6/2016 6:17:00 AM
Nice to see this one again
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:24:00 PM
TESLIM, enjoyed reading your poem... HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 10/31/2013 1:52:00 AM
Good one Teslim. Thanks for your nice points...Kechi
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Date: 10/23/2013 10:14:00 AM
WOW! Teslim, Your voice in this poem, is powerful.... GLITTERING IN THEIR HANDS... love the imagery in that line...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 10/5/2013 3:54:00 PM
Luvly piece...thnks for stopping on my page.
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Date: 10/5/2013 8:40:00 AM
Wonderfully and well penned my bro. Good efforts. Thanks for your words of encouragements,I really appreciate.
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Date: 10/5/2013 8:39:00 AM
Wonderfully and well penned my bro. Good efforts. Thanks for your words of encouragements,I really appreciate.
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