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Where the Raven Reigns

There at the gateway To Heaven or hell They come When their living is done To eternally sleep Beneath the black clouds That seep Like ink On a satin white sheet Where the Raven stands With a gun in her hand Long tresses cascading in black To touch the back Of that plume-like gown Of tiered layers That fall to the ground ~~~~~ Of in the distance There in the light That boarders The brink of night Birds of a feather Circle together Screaming their song Of fright As--- The Princess of darkness Surveys her kingdom There in a sea of mist Where those stone ships list Lost souls set adrift In a picture of--- Horror And Delight ~~~~~~~~ Written by: Elaine George Inspired by the picture For the contest: Among the dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/9/2011 7:41:00 PM
I must admit I was frightened by the images! That means your imagery is superb! I love this!
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Date: 1/18/2011 5:21:00 PM
Awesome write. Phyl
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Date: 1/16/2011 2:34:00 PM
This is a great entry, Lainie, and it's wonderful to see you back on the Soup! I didn't even notice a gun in the woman's hand in the photo, but several contestants have mentioned it so there must be one. And that graveyard certainly does look like "a sea of mist...between darkness and light." Best wishes for success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/16/2011 1:44:00 PM
Powerful poem. Good use of imagery. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen
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Date: 1/16/2011 10:58:00 AM
Beautiful write! I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:39:00 PM
Oh Elaine .. a lovely entry for the contest.. so nice to see u on the Soup my friend... hope all is well and Happy New Year to u and yours.. and good luck in the contest ... Constance will surely luv this piece ... keep in touch ...luv..
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Date: 1/15/2011 8:08:00 PM
Fascinatingly descriptive. It looks as if you have a contender for the contest.
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Date: 1/15/2011 7:00:00 PM
This is excellent!
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