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Where Cheerful Robins Dance

Gleefully you and I smile from a scenic window on life Enchanted by nightfall befriending quixotic autumn sky Embossing crimson brushstrokes on vermilion arc Akin to a painting in classical style of renaissance art Parading in front of our eyes on a thrilling train ride, When orange glow of sinking sunset playfully smiles back, As we savor shrimp-creole with red wine in the dining car And train-tracks beneath us rhythmically clickety-clack Negotiating the panoramic curves befitting forested lands Announcing the mighty reach of whistling train-horn, When the half-moon above peeks through twinkling stars. Balancing gingerly footsteps we jaunt back to our roomette Settling in on narrow bunk beds in a tiny modest space Marveling the red, brown, golden foliage trickling outside Falling on multi-color motif carpeting the misty grounds, As engine screeches intermittently, braking, slowing down, Screaming loud whistle-calls, approaching station stops. We endeavor to sleep until dreams invoke beauteous dawn Awakening to thick white clouds of dense morning fog Slowly giving way to glorious sun-rays piercing the forest, Where cheerful robins dance upon a long leafless branch Welcoming marigold sunrise on the horizon’s blue path As you and I reminisce in the whispering night of romance. October 24, 2019 HM: Strand special by Brian Strand From Atlanta to Washington DC on an overnight train

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Date: 11/12/2020 7:50:00 PM
I rode a train a long time ago. It was interesting. Great poem, Vijay. I enjoyed it :)
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Date: 12/16/2019 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful piece! You have me wanting shrimp creole now.
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Date: 12/11/2019 3:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 11/5/2019 1:06:00 PM
What an awesome train ride - filled with beautiful scenic sights as they rush past you, together with the rhythmic sound of the train wheels. Such a wonderful poem you penned Vijay - In South Africa we have our famous 'Blue Train' which travels from Johannesburg to Cape Town and takes a few days, along the ocean, through our forests, the Drakensberg mountains - a breathtaking trip. Thank-you for sharing such a beautiful poem, and a romantic overnight trip. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 7:55:00 AM
The blue train sounds like a charming trip...much appreciate your visit and comments, Jennifer--many thanks.
Date: 11/1/2019 7:30:00 PM
I love the title of this one and your journey is a delightful story. Hugs, SuZ
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 7:54:00 AM
Thank you SuZ.
Date: 11/1/2019 6:40:00 PM
Hi Vijay, just wanted to see if this goes through
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Pixie.
Date: 10/30/2019 9:09:00 AM
What a gorgeous piece. So much to luxuriate in.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/9/2019 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Richard.
Date: 10/27/2019 9:06:00 PM
What a lovely picturesque journey Vijay. Thank you for taking us along with you. Gorgeous imagery in this joyful piece! : ) xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2019 6:00:00 AM
Much appreciate Connie..many thanks.
Date: 10/27/2019 5:25:00 PM
That is a picture that is well painted. What an incredible poetic journey.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2019 6:00:00 AM
Much appreciate..thank you MA.
Date: 10/27/2019 12:21:00 PM
Beautifully executed Vijay...your quite the poet nowadays lol...I've got to up the ante lol...all the best my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2019 5:59:00 AM
Thank you WW.
Date: 10/27/2019 11:55:00 AM
You my friend have woven a majestic tapestry of vibrant colors, Nature's magnificent beauty and the sound of that train flying down the tracks.. A true gem-- and a very fine a fav too.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2019 5:59:00 AM
So very kind of you, Robert! Much appreciate..many thanks..a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 10/27/2019 11:08:00 AM
what a wonderfully descriptive write on a train ride!! Very romantic views you had!
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Date: 10/28/2019 5:58:00 AM
Many thanks Andrea.
Date: 10/27/2019 10:58:00 AM
A tree with a scenic view..Well penned Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/28/2019 5:58:00 AM
many thanks Joseph.
Date: 10/27/2019 3:56:00 AM
A wondrous voyage in the heart of beauty dearest, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/27/2019 8:58:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.
Date: 10/26/2019 2:00:00 AM
What a ride! Your ardent reader "gleefully smiles from a scenic window on life, too"! Charmed by an Autumn night view! adorning the eyes with colours of warm hues! nourishing soul and Self.. quenching the senses and carving the beauty and the feels into so amazing a poetry! I so much enjoyed your rendition of sweet moments in time, dear Vijay.. an other favourite gem worthy of rereads and appreciation.. Best regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2019 9:02:00 AM
Yes--train rides are especially scenic this time of the year. Much appreciate the kind remarks, Besma..many thanks.
Date: 10/25/2019 11:03:00 PM
I took a train ride to Vermont a few years ago. Something special about riding on a train as you show in this fine work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2019 9:00:00 AM
Vermont is so beautiful--especially this time of the year. Much appreciate, Matthew--many thanks.
Date: 10/25/2019 6:29:00 PM
This beautiful, romantic poem makes me REALLY want to take a train trip! Janice
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Date: 10/26/2019 8:59:00 AM
It's a lot of fun..much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Date: 10/25/2019 3:41:00 PM
Your poem has splendid description and brings back the old-time feel of the overnight train, Vijay. Arlo Guthrie calls trains America's "native sons." So glad I caught this one, my friend. Excellent! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 4:24:00 PM
Trains were glamorous then..I feel they still have the magic. Many thanks Carolyn..much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 10/25/2019 2:42:00 PM
Absolutely lovely!! You really took us there and still left so much to the imagination...Loved this, Vijay ~ a fave.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 4:20:00 PM
Much appreciate HT--many thanks.
Date: 10/25/2019 1:17:00 PM
Your beautiful poem is brimming with captivating imagery, Vijay. It would be a pleasure to borrow your palette, brushes and paints! ~ Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 4:19:00 PM
Happy to read your feedback Paul..much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 10/25/2019 6:06:00 AM
I've been on those tracks from Florida to DC. Loved the imagery, this is a splendid poem beautifully unfolded by you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 11:21:00 AM
You know first hand this wonderful experience. Much appreciate your kind remarks CayCay..many thanks.
Date: 10/24/2019 9:19:00 PM
You always paint such vivid images with your words. Every moment comes to life. You truly are an Artist!! A Masterpiece you have created once more. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 11:19:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your comments, as always. Much appreciate Brandy..many thanks.
Date: 10/24/2019 7:58:00 PM
Lovely Vijay. Very romantic. Beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/25/2019 11:18:00 AM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
Date: 10/24/2019 1:26:00 PM
- Many beautiful pictures through your window, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2019 5:20:00 PM
Yes indeed--beautiful scenery! Much appreciate Anne-Lise..many thanks.
Date: 10/24/2019 10:50:00 AM
I would love to hear this read aloud by "YOU"...Lovely write...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/24/2019 5:19:00 PM
I know what you mean..but I don't have those skills. Much appreciate Arturo..many thanks, my friend.
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