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When You Fall

Tonight sleeping thoughts awake a giant God my dream moulded outside this world I kiss you breathless sighs of mystery in a thousand blinks a picture silhouette Every second heartbeat skips with wonder Straight to the soul echo bounces of chambers walls Under a flower candlelight exploring magic silver lining shadows with the stars shine unique Dancing our love becomes the banquet conquers all tunes as sweetly a songbird sings Written in the sands salt a treasure Of our time together sweeping pulsebeats Who will stand before us as I kneel To honour Because as one I will catch you and save your grace

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/21/2016 4:30:00 AM

Marvelous, my friend, Liam! Enjoyed!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/20/2016 1:06:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^