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When I Die

WHEN I DIE When I die, What a glorious day it Will be! For I will get rid of this mortal Body That is known as ME! © Demetrios Trifiatis 30 APRIL 2013

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/1/2013 2:08:00 AM

I agree with Donna. Don't hurry now! We want you here with us for longer. Just the though upsets me. Lovely write though!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/1/2013 3:22:00 AM

I will try! Thank you for your concern!

Donna Jones

Date: 4/30/2013 10:25:00 PM

Well heaven is grand but let's keep you around a while eh??? :-) :-) :-) lovely poem

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/1/2013 12:15:00 AM

God willing, I will! Thank you!

Christine Phillips

Date: 4/30/2013 2:34:00 PM

I like this simple work of art. It is very strong. Would you consider the order of words (It will be, instead of will it be) to make it even more stronger?

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2013 5:03:00 PM

Thy will be done! Thank you!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 4/30/2013 11:11:00 AM

highly philosophical. Very nice.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2013 5:07:00 PM

Thank you! It takes one....

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/30/2013 6:23:00 AM

This is an enlightening and a far superior write my friend! You have written a masterpiece here my friend! I really enjoyed reading your amazing poem this morning! What a tremendous piece Demetrios! A remarkable poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2013 5:21:00 PM

Thank you Russell!

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 4/30/2013 5:55:00 AM

When u die,.....then u live.good stuff!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 4/30/2013 5:22:00 PM

That's it! Thank you!