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What you do not want another craves ardently what you do not need another is obsessed by Life's ironic tragedies What you don't want, free why prolong the agony if not satisfied Another dies for a taste Another longs for a touch Please make up your mind Love her well or let her be Kiss her lips AND soul superlative love must be or it is not love at all Eileen

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Date: 12/16/2014 11:54:00 PM
Yes, love her well or let her be...we deserve all or nothing at all! Lukewarm relationships are the worst kind. I love these insightful tankas, Eileen...wishing you a blessed holiday season...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/16/2014 2:34:00 PM
Thanks, I am good. Enjoying my mom and Nicole being here.
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:31:00 AM
Kiss her lips and soul. I love it Eileen. I agree with Richard. It's such a powerful song that says it all.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 10:49:00 AM
Thanks, Brenda. Good to have you here. Hugs
Date: 12/16/2014 8:14:00 AM
I love the song "It's in his kiss". Yes it's important to fully love the one you are with. This poem captures the theme eloquently.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 10:11:00 AM
There is so much truth in that song, Richard. Yes, it's a great song. How are you? Hope all is well. I'm getting in the Christmas spirit. I feel my energy returning thanks to the meds. :) Hope to have a great Christmas. Hope the same for you!
Date: 12/16/2014 7:53:00 AM
Three tankas for the price of one, Awesome! I like the second one, another dies for a taste, another longs for a touch. There is always so much in your words beyond the surface. You Rock! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 10:13:00 AM
Yes...that's often the case. Thanks for visiting, Cas. Hope all is well. Hugs.
Date: 12/16/2014 7:00:00 AM
Oh my dear great to know! We r all busy pepl still finding time for our passion... Writing... Gud to know more abt u! I m out of my home for one wk, still preparing for a presentation tomorrow, n in between reading amazing poets too.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 7:02:00 AM
Yes...so good to know more about you, Dr, Upma. I'm honored for your interest in me! :) Sending you hugs!
Date: 12/16/2014 6:52:00 AM
Yes that's what she always longs for my poetic queen ... A kiss! Great write dear n a lovely avatar!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 6:54:00 AM
Love you, Dr Upma. I'm still here in my office...Had four classes today and the last one really tires me. It runs from 12:35pm till 1:50. Drained! I'm just trying to unwind before heading home. I'm also working on a student assembly on Monday on the these of Christmas. I'm a busy bee. Love you as ever! Hugs
Date: 12/16/2014 4:53:00 AM
Growing poetically, maturing in wisdom, dear Eileen! Your dream soon will incarnate!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 6:58:00 AM
Etsi enai? ;) Enois then emai toso eksipni tora? Akh, Demetri mou. Ti na kano? Efkharisto gia to minima...alla...toses meres then erthes. Then berazi. Zoe mas dheedhaski sckleres mathemata....Thanks for your visit, my dear poet. Practicing my Greek with you. You know how I am enamored by your language and all things Greek. Filakia!
Date: 12/16/2014 4:17:00 AM
dramatic way of expressing the polarity of affection, Eileen... this is truly engaging and lovely.. yess, give the woman a kiss!.. huggs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/16/2014 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, my dear Nette. Lovely to have your visit. A kiss....all the world for a kiss. There is a song that goes..."If you want to know if he loves you so, it's in his kiss."

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