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What Lurks Within

Too much I am inquiring I don’t hear a response I use to be inspiring Now the beast haunts Its deep within Unsure of the size I’m afraid I’ll sin In the last of my cries It’s a little scary And kind of tough My body I barely carry And my happiness I bluff You depict my fate You hold my hand through Let’s set a date To bid adieu I’ll fight till the end I’ll hold my head high I won’t bend I’ll fight to see a blue sky

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/8/2013 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Lily xx
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/8/2013 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, Thank you so much :) - Love, Lily
Date: 4/7/2013 9:03:00 PM
I liked this one a lot too. Great write! J
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/8/2013 11:59:00 AM
Miss Oliver, Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it so :) - Love, Lily
Date: 4/7/2013 6:10:00 PM
Hi Lily, this is a very deep and xool entry. Congratulations in Seren's "what lurks within" contest. Always~ LINDA
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/8/2013 12:01:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you! Thank you for the read, I always love seeing your comments :) - Love, Lily
Date: 4/7/2013 5:41:00 PM
congrats Lily...Seren
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Lily Mayfield
Date: 4/8/2013 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for my winning spot! you may not know it, but it means a lot, Thank you! -Love, Lily

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