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What I'M Trying To Say

I miss your warm embrace I miss your goofy laugh I miss your silly look I miss our late talks I miss your masculine scent I miss you finishing my sentences What I'm saying is, I'm dying without you 10-31-16 Alexis Y.

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/1/2016 7:27:00 AM

Excellent write!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/1/2016 7:26:00 AM

Been there - done that - bought the T-Shirt. I am sorry you are going through this. It is painful. I wish you all the best.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/1/2016 5:43:00 AM

Missing someone is love unfulfilled hope it will be fulfilled next time around dear, Alexis! Powerful, sentimental writing!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/31/2016 10:43:00 PM

Very bittersweet poem, Alexis. The longing for lost love and the remembrance of the things that made that love so special is a sad affair to deal with. I hope God do comfort your heart. Love and prayers to you, dear friend. RW

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/31/2016 7:08:00 PM

Would a thousand hugs help? Even though sad this is a lovely romantic poem!

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/31/2016 9:45:00 PM

Hi Arthur, That was such a sweet thing to say.But I only need one hug from you:-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 10/31/2016 5:20:00 PM

Aw Alexis, this is so sad. I know because I know this feeling, sort of. But the same things apply, every one of those little things that made us love them, make us miss them even that much more. Sadly beautiful.

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/31/2016 9:48:00 PM

Hi Chris, I agree, it's those little things that make us miss them terribly. I appreciate that you stopped by my friend:-) Alexis