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What If Today Was the Day?

The common man worries of money, health and fare. But, to be very honest there is no compare to the worries of those who everyday pray for the welfare of others, not themselves, on that day. So, ask of yourself, “Will I be one saved?” Not worrying for others shows the road that’s unpaved. Instead, give unto others, because that’s the only way to make it Heaven, if you ask, “What if Today was the Day?

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Date: 7/23/2008 9:32:00 AM
It's easy to forget what is important. Things seem to fall in place when we put ourselves last. Good write. Vince
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Date: 7/20/2008 2:33:00 PM
it is better to have one true friend than a million dollars, you can always lose the money, but a true friend is yours for life. a very well wrote piece of poetry. thank you for reading my poem dreams we had and for your comment.
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Date: 7/14/2008 11:29:00 PM
tnx... so true.. materials are not important in our life... it is love that we share with other people.
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Date: 7/14/2008 9:41:00 PM
This is so true. What if today was the day. It would not be about the money and what we have. It will be about what we have done for others and given from our hearts. Beautiful write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/14/2008 2:42:00 PM
Beautiful write, and a beautiful heart of the one who penned this great poem...You are good, I follow your work here on the soup, and admire you so much...We must give freely, and enjoy the happiness it brings to others, Always, Christy
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Date: 7/14/2008 11:42:00 AM
I like you heart. Pure and good. I would think Jesus smiled when you wrote this. Anne-Marie Christine
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Date: 7/14/2008 8:57:00 AM
Hi Michael One doesn't get love unless they give love. Excellent write! So real and so true! A beautiful message....I feel so very blessed by counting my blessings everyday.Very well written. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/14/2008 7:46:00 AM
Wonderful message Michael - you are a blessing to read - stay strong
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Date: 7/14/2008 7:40:00 AM
This really makes you think...I live my life the best I can so...if it is today I have no fear at all. I love poems that really make the reader think and contemplate. This certainly does that. My best to you, Charlie
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Date: 7/14/2008 7:15:00 AM
Personally, my reward already lies here on earth, when I do reach out to help others. Anything else is just the icing on the cake. An important message in this wonderful write. Love, Shar
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