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What do you see

Looking at the portrait of myself I try to decide the wall or shelf And as I wonder which will be Of what of me will people see You cannot trust a portrait For it is only a figure And eyes ask the mirror What others see and picture You can't run from emotions They are always there They look for disapproval And eyes that often stare Beauty has its place And vanity it’s pride Hiding from rejection Of what we may deny The difference between a portrait and a mirror Though times it may not seem The portrait is a pose, the mirror is a scene A portrait is a time gone past While the mirror is the thee The portrait tells it memories The mirror knows it leaves Frozen in time not dead But still alive The mirror fears The time that will arrive The portrait has escaped What silence deny While the mirror reminds Of sins near by Who am I to judge Things near by When silence covers The reason they cry The portrait it holds Secrets known above While down on earth A figure we love Strangers know not the difference So called friends know what occurred Only God can tell the difference When the eyes of many are blurred The portrait has no pity The mirror seeks love The past has no memory The present what comes from above

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Date: 1/13/2024 3:01:00 AM
Beautiful
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Date: 1/11/2024 5:06:00 PM
I like your use of metaphor, TS. A lot of wisdom in this fine poem, my friend. Plenty to think about once your poem has been read. I hope your 2024 is going well! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 1/11/2024 9:54:00 AM
This is a very deep poem and l like the way you use the mirror and the portrait to represent a person. Nicely written. love phyl
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:17:00 PM
Very deep..
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Date: 1/7/2024 11:27:00 PM
Looking into the mirror makes me sick seeing how old I've become. Yet the memories remain. Deep poem.
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Date: 1/7/2024 9:55:00 PM
This is brilliant and so well written about mirror and portrait. While a portrait has captured memories and moments, mirrors show the present and whats within you. A very deep and intriguing write. I love the flow of this too. Pleasure reading your work as always
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Date: 1/7/2024 5:12:00 PM
just wow! your words are insightful and profound. I hadn't thought about the difference between a portrait and a mirror until I read your poem..I liked the last verse: The portrait has no pity The mirror seeks love The past has no memory The present what comes from above. Brilliantly done...am faving!
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