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What a Beautiful View

I was wearing a beautiful t-shirt It’s purple with sequins, its quite low The man on the next breakfast table You can guess where his eyes did go! He sat and stared at my assets And then he gave me a wink Wish he’d talked because I have other facets I wonder what his poor wife did think Jan Allison 29th October 2014

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/31/2014 5:53:00 PM

Very nice light poem, Jan. But I feel sorry for his poor wife. ;) .... Have a very Happy Halloween day! Xxx D.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 5:55:00 PM

SO did I Dorian - haven't seen either of them since lol Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Nehls

Date: 10/30/2014 7:35:00 AM

Hi, Jan. When presented with a beautiful flower it is hard to observe anything but the petals. Very bold of him to wink while sitting with his wife. Very nice my friend. I enjoyed it.... Robert.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 8:30:00 AM

I was highly embarrassed Robert - thankfully we were late to breakfast today so the winker wasn't around:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/29/2014 7:34:00 PM

Awesome, :) she might have been looking too, ya never know :) cool poem! Hugs xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 7:36:00 PM

LOL I'll let you know tomorrow lol:-) Hugs jan xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/29/2014 4:48:00 PM

Loved it... His wife would probably say... you can look as long as you go home with me... LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 4:50:00 PM

lol that made me giggle carol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/29/2014 3:15:00 PM

A most clever and intriguing write here Jan!! Enjoyed it very much!! Cheers, Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 3:57:00 PM

Thanks Gary - it is amazing where I get my inspiration from these days LOL but I do try and write with humour whenever I can but I had to share this little gem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/29/2014 1:50:00 PM

Hi jan seems u r enjoying life ! Happy writing my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 3:56:00 PM

I am having a marvelous relaxing time Dr Sharma. I know when we return it will be a stressful time so I am stocking up on amazing positive memories from my holiday:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/29/2014 11:58:00 AM

Hi Jan!! I know you told me you had a room with a view, but did not realize that even the dining room had one! Sorry about the weather....over on my side of the island it was sunny all day...even went swimming! (I did hear thunder this afternoon.) (will mail you.) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 12:00:00 PM

LOL Paul - the view from the dining room window is truly breathtaking not so sure bout the view inside lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 11:25:00 AM

I tried to get my poetic license but I couldn't pass the parrellel write portion of the test so I failed. I hope you are having a wonderful time in Malta.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 11:31:00 AM

lol Maurice you will pass with flying colours next time my friend - apart from the inclement weather today - Malta is absolutely stunning - we are off to visit Gozo on Saturday that too is truly beautiful:-) Hugs jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/29/2014 11:05:00 AM

First of all what a relief when I saw the title I thought you were reffering to my colonoscopy and I was wondering how you were allowed in the room. Having said that boys will be boys and I can't tell you how happy I am to hear you have a great rack. Lastly a great job on this fun write.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 11:12:00 AM

LOL Maurice... remember I also have the benefit of poetic licence - poor Paul is going to be dreadfully disappointed when we meet lol Hugs jan xxx

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/29/2014 9:02:00 AM

You and I not only have similar names dear sis, but we're both looney tunes!!! Love ya! XXX

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 10:28:00 AM

LOng as we make people laugh Jack that is the most important thing! Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/29/2014 9:01:00 AM

Maybe she doesn't care were he gets his appetite. Did you do the bend and snap for him?

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 10:27:00 AM

lol NOOOOOOOOOO Brenda ha ha ha Hugs jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/29/2014 8:32:00 AM

And that was only at breakfast.Imagine If He saw them at dinner? : ).Lol.!It was supposed to rainJan..So the weather is favouring you today dear Jan : ).Enjoy your day : )

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 11:11:00 AM

BEHAVE TIM! hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 10:53:00 AM

I promise to look at her eyes next time :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 10:27:00 AM

Lol Charmaine - we had sun rain thunder sun rain sun rain so far today but it is soooooo beautiful who cares about the weather:-) hugs Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/29/2014 8:10:00 AM

Destructing someone form concentrating on his breakfast by showing him things one shouldn't see is a federal offence punishable by wives! Ha-ha! I forgive the poor fellow, dear Jan, who would resist such a show? Enjoyed it!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 8:23:00 AM

LOL thanks for the lovely comment Demetrios. Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/29/2014 7:04:00 AM

That's cause you flaunt them so much....lol just kidding....what happens in Malta stays in Malta....hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 10/29/2014 2:39:00 PM

You can always dream :)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/29/2014 10:44:00 AM

For a moment I thought I saw you in Malta: ).Must have beenn my imagination Tim : ).Hi Jan what happens in Malta stays in Malta and what I see I would not tell...Mama taught me that : )

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 8:22:00 AM

The truth is I do cover up at home lol - no worries Tim if ever we meet I will make sure I wear the most shapeless clothes in the world so you can't see my curves lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/29/2014 6:58:00 AM

well his poor wife if only she knew i doubt x would me his mark up excellent pen jan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Liam:-) Hugs Jan xxx