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Waiting, I'm patiently waiting for your ship to sail on back to shore Time standing still, does it even exist It's been too long since we once kissed Your scent on my pillow fading away Wishing and hoping you were here this day I lay in the darkness thinking of you and of the day all of our dreams come true Sounds of footsteps creaking on the pine floor Gentle knocking upon my bedroom door Visions of beauty, visions so clear My meaning, my whole has finally appeared Crawl into my arms, crawl into my heart Our two lives together, no longer apart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/11/2014 6:50:00 PM
Another jewel from your romantic heart.... Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 12/11/2014 6:52:00 PM
Thank you Arlene...hugs Tim
Date: 12/7/2014 3:30:00 PM
Its always nice to crawl into the heart of those who loves us most. A warm welcome..Indeed deserves a favo(u)rite!Beautiful!To my favs!
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Date: 12/7/2014 3:34:00 PM
Thank You Charma.....she can crawl in any time...hugs Tim..ND
Date: 12/7/2014 5:18:00 AM
A well written sonnet!
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:49:00 AM
Tim, Another good write. :) blessings
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Date: 12/5/2014 10:00:00 AM
Thank you my good friend....hugs Tim
Date: 12/4/2014 12:51:00 PM
What a sweet welcome home treat! Those last two lines....crawl into my arms. The arms of a man who is full of love is the most wonderful place on earth to be. Such a sense of security....Beautiful, Tim.
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:59:00 AM
Thank you my dear Eileen... Hugs Tim
Date: 12/4/2014 11:28:00 AM
That would be the perfect Christmas gift my friend, Tim. A dream to come true so beautiful and blissful as your writing is!
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Date: 12/5/2014 9:58:00 AM
I do think it would be...thank you my friend
Date: 12/4/2014 6:53:00 AM
- Lovely welcome home poem, Tim !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2014 7:10:00 AM
Thanks A-L .....hugs Tim
Date: 12/4/2014 4:37:00 AM
nice sonnet Tim:-) Hugs Jan x
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:53:00 AM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim
Date: 12/4/2014 3:06:00 AM
Heartfelt n a touching write Tim! Masterful sonnet!
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:06:00 AM
Thank you Upma my dear friend....hugs Tim
Date: 12/4/2014 3:00:00 AM
ooh, crawl into my heart.. i love it for there is willingness & submission :))
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:05:00 AM
Thanks Hija.... Hugs Tim
Date: 12/3/2014 7:27:00 PM
that is better, good job
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/3/2014 8:06:00 PM
Thanks for catching my error Cas
Date: 12/3/2014 7:11:00 PM
Nice love Sonnet Tim. I love, footsteps creaking on the pine floor.
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:14:00 PM
Thank you Brenda...hugs Tim
Date: 12/3/2014 7:03:00 PM
Nice!! The longing of the heart is a powerful force to reckon with . . .
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/3/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thank you David my good friend

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