Weary Soul

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~Weary Soul~ (Free Style) Where should I go? What should I do? The past calls me I'm long overdue My soul is weary I feel so old With nothing to hold I'm feeling so cold I look at the sky The Mallorn trees I look at this land And beyond the sea I have to leave you I'll always miss you. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 -Inspired by LOTR books, movies- January,13,2013

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Kearra Kramer

Date: 2/5/2015 10:32:00 AM

I absolutely adore the reference to the Lord of the Rings. This is really great work! I give it a seven

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 12:51:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Kearra, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/13/2015 9:46:00 AM

I love the lord of the rings, and this poem does the original writter so well in his storytelling, he would have loved to read this dear girl, and maybe asked if he could put it in his book, well done, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2015 7:51:00 AM

Thank you so kindly Cherl, my very dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. I am very humbled by your compliments. Tolkien was a great genius of a writer! Much appreciate your visit! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/13/2015 8:44:00 AM

Wonderful brings to mind the Tolkien verse the road goes ever on and on. Absolutely loved it thank you. Love Shane xxx

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/14/2015 1:20:00 PM

I also love Tolkien and Fantasy novels. love Shane xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2015 7:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Shane very dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Much appreciated! Glad you loved it. I love all the Tolkien series of books. They're awesome! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/13/2015 4:27:00 AM

Just follow the inner voice and it will lead you to where you suppose to be, dear Dorian! Beautiful verse and a seven!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2015 7:39:00 AM

Hello Demetrios! Thank you so kindly my very sweet and kind dearest friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Much appreciated! And thanks for the 7! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "