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This is a surprise for Becca Teagan, based on her poem "I Met him in a dream" This is a collaboration surprise! I took her poem, split it into verses, and then provided after each verse the male version. Hope you like it Becca!!!

In a dream, I went to him Hidden inside a wispy night Stars shining their twinkle lights I sneaked into his slumbered thoughts In a dream, I went over to her Hidden inside a sultry night Stars shining, their erotic lights I snuck into her dream world dark Of silken skin, my auburn tresses Flowed like satin around his face He stirred, he trembled as I traced My finger on his lips, his cheek Of silken skin and her auburn hair Flowing like honeydew around her face She stirred and trembled as I traced My fingers all over her bodice in lace He opened his eyes to realize I’m not a ghostly apparition I’m that dream that he’s been dreaming His temptress, angel - his anything She opened her eyes as she surmised I’m not the phantom of her sensual nights I’m that dream that lives in her heart Her knight and savoir, that’s just the start In my dream, I danced for him Gracefully and unashamed Illumined by a candle’s flame Exposed before him as he stared In my dream, she danced and swayed Gracefully, unabashed nor ashamed Illuminated by the candles flickering flame Exposed before me, such pleasures to delight I watched his eyes as they devoured Mesmerized with every move He tried in vain to speak my name Pleading with those smoldering eyes I stared into her eyes as they devoured I, mesmerized with her dancing eyes She tried in vain to shout out my name Pleading with those melancholy eyes As I seduced and tantalized My soft, feminine, sensual power Brought him to his knees In helpless desire She seduced and tantalized Her white lace and sensual prowess I was conquered and on my knees Helpless to her magical touch In my dream, he couldn’t move Motionless, a man in chains Powerless as I came near I laid my breath upon his skin In my dream, she silently lay Motionless, enticing my desires Powerless as I knelt before her charm I laid my kiss upon her sweet moist lips As I breathed in to know his scent The mix of pheromones and cologne Made me lose my self-control Tasting him with every kiss As I was consumed by her flowers scent Rapture mixed with perfume brought my descent I have lost all self control Tasting her with kisses my only goal Loving him with every touch Taken by his solid form 'Twas in this dream that I discovered I have no desire for another Loving her with every touch Taken by her seductive sways Twas in this dream my heart rests sure I have no desire, for any other

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2015 2:07:00 AM
Arthur and Becca, you surely both an excellent poem here!!!! superb!~Olive Eloisa
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/16/2015 9:57:00 PM
Thank you Olive! hugs
Date: 8/4/2015 2:19:00 PM
An excellent "collaboration" from two of my favorite poets... Beautifully penned, Arthur!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/5/2015 12:39:00 AM
You are so kind Kelly, million thanks!
Date: 8/3/2015 6:01:00 PM
A beautiful write friend............A..M.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/5/2015 12:39:00 AM
Thanks again Afolabi!!! :)
Date: 8/3/2015 9:03:00 AM
An excellent write,your beautiful piece flows smoothly and the description is very clear. I love your write............A.M.
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Date: 8/1/2015 2:34:00 AM
Wow. This is just lovely! I see that this is a surprise... so nice...Loved how you've responded to each of the previous verse. Congrats you two!
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Date: 7/31/2015 5:47:00 AM
Mesmerizingly romantic! You and Becca have created a masterpiece for us the mere humans! Bravo, Arthur and Becca!
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Date: 7/31/2015 2:15:00 AM
A sweet and wonderful write, this is so emotive and lovely. Excellence..........A.M.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/5/2015 12:37:00 AM
Thanks Folabi, was such fun to do!
Date: 7/30/2015 8:34:00 AM
Totally amazed by both of your's and Becca's verses. This is hot!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/5/2015 12:36:00 AM
Thank-you Richard, was a pleasure to do this!
Date: 7/29/2015 1:13:00 PM
ohh my, what a smashing response to becca's work.. you enchant, arthur...huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/29/2015 10:38:00 PM
You always brighten my day, when someone of your caliber of writing says such nice things, it motivates me to write and learn more! Hugs
Date: 7/29/2015 12:25:00 AM
wow, that is fascinating what you did with her poem. It made it even more special! I see she is calling it "echo" and that would be a great name for this kind of a poem!!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 8/1/2015 1:22:00 PM
this is called correspondence poetry..:0
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/30/2015 1:54:00 PM
you have invented more than one my friend or am I going dotty thinking about that lol:-)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/29/2015 10:34:00 PM
Are you saying I invented a new Form? Oh la la I love you!!!!! hugs!!!!
Date: 7/28/2015 1:03:00 PM
This is much more than an echo but more of a slow dance....beautiful harmony
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/29/2015 10:32:00 PM
I like how you think Tim !!!! Cheers
Date: 7/28/2015 5:07:00 AM
Oh my word Arthur - an outstanding combination - a 7 faves - wow man you are a poetic genius even if you have said so yourself lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/29/2015 10:29:00 PM
Oh Jan, really, I am gonna have to add you to the payroll!!! Thank you so much! hugs!
Date: 7/28/2015 1:11:00 AM
I just read her poem too and wow, what a combination! Lovely when a poem can so inspire another! 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/29/2015 10:28:00 PM
Thanks Connie it was pure joy to be able to write this!

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