Water Sport

She climbed on the table at tea and said she was surfing the sea, I did wonder why, as tables are dry - then noticed her puddles of pee... written 17th July for Lisa's contest based on the table-surfer pic

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/24/2022 8:10:00 AM

Hi Jack a fun write, nice little twist at the end. Enjoyed enormously. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/20/2022 2:51:00 PM

That was unexpected but funny. Nicely done Jack. love phyl

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 7:07:00 AM

Interrelating end. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2022 1:50:00 PM

I LOVE LOVE this one. It should have been a top win. Congrats, my friend

Paul Callus

Date: 7/19/2022 9:49:00 AM

This was definitely unexpected, but so hilarious, Jack :) Your creative humour is amongst the best on this site! ~ Regards // paul

Terry Flood

Date: 7/19/2022 6:40:00 AM

Now, that gave me a giggle, Jack. Thanks. Terry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2022 5:32:00 AM

Okay, I guess that was a bad time for the couple. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for all your visits. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2022 2:14:00 PM

Ha ha, Very nice one