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Watching An Ant

Here I sit, in a gentle summer’s breeze, By a peaceful lake in soft green grass. Transfixed on an ant following in line. What is he doing? I pondered. Where are they going? I thought. Then he left the group and went astray, By himself, I thought was odd, As ants are always in groups of many. I noticed he had found a small leaf, Crawled around it, as if a prize. Also near, a small puddle, And some brilliant, emerald green moss. He then stopped, and seemed to sit, Much like me, on this summer’s day. I then looked over, where he came from, The train of ants had disappeared. Perhaps they went off, to fight a battle, And this one ant, felt it’s not right, So he found his sanctuary, … Just like me. By: Greg Stanley Written on December 14, 2011 Entry into the “In the Mood” Contest By: Greg Stanley December 14, 2011

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Date: 1/1/2012 12:37:00 PM
NOW...you goes to my Fav poets list...
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Date: 12/24/2011 8:58:00 AM
Hey,...let's gang up on Vie and await this so-called ROAD KILL poem she spoke of down below....ha ha. She's right,..poets can write about anything!
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Date: 12/24/2011 8:56:00 AM
Greg...Congrats on this "buggy" write! I am fascinated by ants and I Spyed your title. Maybe, just maybe this lil fella was trying to teach you how to relax...he led u to his sanctuary...? Happy Days to u this Christmas. Poetry friends, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/22/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "In The Mood" contest Greg. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2011 12:02:00 AM
greg, this is a charming poem about watching an ant. Poets can find something to say about anything. That is so nice! Congratulations.
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