Watch Your Step

I thought it odd, this parallel 'Tween what is couth, and what is feral But sings the Herald, my steps in peril- Considered, I, that all was well... I know this path is dangerous, Upset that Life is merely heinous When all I want is to be Famous, So ends this tragic tale!

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/18/2014 9:34:00 PM

Chan The Man What a powerful write about life and the struggles we face everyday to survive and get through. Nicely done my friend. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Demise poem. Love and Hugs Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 1/19/2014 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for another review, Sweet Pea <3

Ryan Wegenast

Date: 9/12/2013 6:34:00 PM

Perfect!!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/13/2013 10:18:00 AM

Thanks again, Ryan :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 9/12/2013 12:30:00 PM

So true! I think this is what every poet here wants, I know I do!...A very honest and dramatic poem! Nicely done!...Thank you so much for reading and commenting kindly on my poems. I really appreciate all of them!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 9/21/2013 5:30:00 PM

I loved Savage Garden!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 4:20:00 PM

Kelly, you are quite talented and deserve to have your work lauded. Thank you, truly, madly, deeply (to quote that old Savage garden song lol). I am humbled by your reviews of my work :)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/11/2013 7:41:00 PM

The struggles and conflicts of life told in a fantastic Shakespearean tale :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/12/2013 9:38:00 AM

I'm all about some drama LOL! Thanks, hon <3