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Waiting Heart

Don't sit still my waiting heart for even a mere glimpse past her waning glow into her radiant beam will create a crusade to beat on Don't sit still my waiting heart for your future rewards are great unearth all her sacred treasures bring to light her hidden essence and let her brilliance shine Don't sit still my waiting heart for even the sun shines on a cloudy day every fleeting moment becomes a blessing in due time distant hearts unite and moonbeams become whole

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Date: 2/11/2016 8:56:00 AM
A wonder and a bliss, your lines have given my heart a kiss and I am glad on your page, I did not suffer a miss. An outright 7 dear colleague
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Date: 2/8/2016 2:48:00 PM
Very nice Tim.
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Date: 2/8/2016 6:18:00 AM
- Lovely poem Tim, the last verse says it all - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:16:00 PM
Hi, Tim... the ending is perfect and sets a great mood. Hope all was worth the wait. LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:20:00 AM
Such a a beauty this is...Oh that wanton feeling for the waning moon is so deep.Exceptional fave.
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Date: 2/5/2016 5:56:00 AM
Profound feelings excellently expressed, dear Tim!
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Date: 2/5/2016 1:21:00 AM
Lovely free verse, Tim. Elaine
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Date: 2/4/2016 6:18:00 PM
nice poem..
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