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Voiceless Eagerness

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I'm that my words and pen can't express my weakness. Nobody could have foreseen I felt such happiness. My bald secret is now included in my poetic liveness. I'm at a loss for words to define my soulfulness. All that I do for you is for you and your uniqueness. To be clear, you were born to bestow our joyfulness. Had sent a blessing to us thanks to God's holiness. Son, you depict nicely how a son may have lightness. My duty will always be to offer you matchless. If you're in the lamest rule, you deserve my promptness. You lifted my artwork to an extreme level of skillfulness. Everywhere I fit, you seem to follow me with firmness. Regardless of where I am or how I manage my illness. The ghost that lurks within me is a mystic elusiveness. Of inspiration and creativity that is in my mind flawless. It just takes one look to confer my focus and cleanliness. Claim anything you envy, but don't leave me clueless. Yet, I am aware of how grateful you are for my lavishness. Even the urge to craft your own way has uniqueness. With all my resources, knowledge, and awareness. All have a role to play in preserving our rising family spotless. Sway to the beat of my soul and embrace my closeness Allow yourself to widen your eyes; your destiny will be harmless. I drew the full moon for you to retain your greatness. Without question, I admire you for your graciousness. My son, I'll outline your disparity and avail your tactfulness. I meant to say that you sparked my thoughtfulness. Consider that I'm always aware of your level of attentiveness. I can tell from our relationship around gleefulness. Even if I die, you will have a piece of my warm-heartedness. Placed first in the contest Written: May 04, 2021 All Yours (Jun 10) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/10/2022 2:01:00 AM

So lovely, a beautiful tribute from a father to his son, love it… Belle

Milton Robertson

Date: 5/9/2022 5:54:00 PM

Very good. Very different

Weston Gregory

Date: 5/9/2022 4:51:00 PM

A lovely write poet.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/10/2021 12:48:00 AM

Real monument. Congratulations!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/8/2021 4:36:00 AM

What a monumental poem of a father's love for his son, my dearest friend, Lasaad. If only all fathers could feel the same this world would be a better one. A masterpiece. Blessings!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/7/2021 12:40:00 PM

This is a fine example of cherished relationship. Words of love stemming from your heart. Much enjoyed the message you convey, Lasaad.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/7/2021 10:36:00 AM

A wonderful write. Your son is fortunate to have a wonderful father like you.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2021 10:55:00 PM

What a great piece of poetry, all in monorhyme. You expose a relationship between father and son perfectly. Well done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 6/6/2021 4:38:00 PM

This wonderful poem, throbs with the love connection between father and son, and is full of tender meaning and devotion. It's a fave for me. Blessings, Evelyn

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/6/2021 7:23:00 PM

I very much appreciate your graceful visit and comment, my dear friend, Evelyn. I hope that you enjoyed your weekend, and thanks for the fav. Have a wonderful evening! Blessings.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/6/2021 4:33:00 PM

WoW! Lasaad, You have composed a well-written monorhyme expressing the love you have for your son. Thanks for sharing this gem and a glimpse of you, the man, father, and poet. This is going into my fav collection:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/6/2021 7:21:00 PM

I very much appreciate your graceful visit and comment, my dear friend, Alexis, I hope that you enjoyed your weekend. Have a wonderful evening! Blessings.

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/6/2021 3:22:00 PM

Indeed Lasaad, the most meaningful love one gets, is reciprocal family love especially from the children, and you certainly have it in spades, judging by this heartfelt write, the oneness theme works perfectly, and what a crescendo to finish on, overcoming cold death with warmth, a fine tribute to behold, cheers David

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/6/2021 3:38:00 PM

I very much appreciate your graceful visit and comment, my dear friend, David, I hope that you enjoy your long weekend. Have a wonderful Sunday! Blessings.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/6/2021 1:38:00 PM

Sway to the beat of my soul and embrace my closeness. Something only a son can bring out in us. Especially a loving son and a loving father, no greater glory. Dear poet, I fav this, thanks you for sharing it, keep your smile always,

Sotto Poet
Date: 6/6/2021 2:13:00 PM

Thank you very much, dear friend, for your generous visit and lovely words. Nothing is better than a loving son or daughter, and thanks for sharing my poem with your fav, blessings, and best regards.