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vivid fire

Friday, 5:30 PM.
I was praying with out a reason.
raining day - hot season;
rare feelings beyond any reasons

In me, on me, and around me;
I felt it everywhere -
this was bigger than Delaware,
but i knew that people would doubt me

Think that I'm crazy;
loco - sick in the head,
like Emily Rose chained to the bed.
Toco - the back of my neck

Hair standing up,
adrenaline is rushing -
my prayers are raising up,
and God's hand is brushing 

the dirt off my shoulders;
letting me know HE was there,
and that i shall grow - older
spirituality - bolder

So i...
got hot and colder,
and i...
broke down and cried
then i ...
saw a river going down my eyes

Like a fountain of life -
i wanted to drink it.
Not afraid to die
because i am that guy

That is going to a better place,
where sorrow and tears -
GOD will replace

So lets get back,
to finish the story -
running the track,
without rushing HIS glory

There i was again...
when HIS presence began,
and the unreasonable took place;
my knees got weak and my eyes got glazed

I bow down -
no picking, no turning.
i felt microscopic, 
and the inside was burning

Like a vivid fire -
burning my body.
A holy desire
like heaven throwing a party

can't really explain what i felt -
HE is the only kind
that will make diamonds melt -
in 0.00 seconds without checking the time
nor the alignment belt

I praise you my Lord
for holding the doors;
while stretching out your hands
picking me up from the floor.


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  1. Date: 11/3/2009 11:29:00 AM
    Beautifully poised. Loved it... Faith sparkles. All the best. Would you pls comment Blue&Red. I'm thankful for commenting CauxEvol.

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 4:54:00 PM
    you are in love with the right man!..... very nice.....

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 7:08:00 PM
    Amazing and contagious feeling; your devotion is so vivid in this piece, Diogenes. What a fantastic experience! Amen, my friend. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 12:22:00 PM
    A mighty divinely granted experience, God does these things, if one will receive them, God bless you man, continue to walk close to love. sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 2:13:00 PM
    Bliss! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 2:42:00 PM
    Great poem, love it! God Is In you!

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 2:03:00 PM
    Very emotionally expressive of your faith. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 5:31:00 AM
    1. like heaven throwing a party 2. (without) just two catches... Well three the third is this was da bomb. I enjoyed it I could feel His presence in it. God Bless

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 10:05:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your heartfelt poetry today Diogenes. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 10:00:00 AM
    It's a delight to be touch by GOD'S very own hands. I'm feeling so joyful to hear that a brother somewhere,far or near, has been touch another day by the HOLY SPIRIT. Have you ever heard the song named inexplicable? I'm at least 95% sure that you've heard it. Keep up the GREAT WORK! I.N.

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 9:36:00 AM
    loving the rhyme at the beginning and you are right God IS wonderful..tumelo