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Collaboration, Constance La France First Sonnet, and, second Sonnet Sotto Poet
Dreamer, can you feel my kiss on your cheek, the flutter of my hands upon your hair; my sweet aura is one of great mystique, the fragrance of flowers drift in the air. Dreamer, you called upon Cupid for love, to bring desire, passion and bliss divine; but I am of dreams and from high above, oh dreamer, lets stargaze laying supine. The gold moon shining on us is fleeting, for already the birds stir in the trees; soon dreamer, the dawn- we will be greeting, my love, I must leave you on the morn's breeze. And you will awake dreamer- with charm; soon, a lady will be holding your arm. ****************** Oh Cupid, luscious whiff of magic love, when "love" comes it is a blissful feeling; I lay in bed gazing at stars above, Cupid, spread your wings and bring my darling. Oh Cupid, rejoice with a flourish blow, our love grows more intense and more divine; sexy seductress Venus you should know, you are sublime- like a fresh spring design. Oh Cupid, find your petals to throw down, from candles lit- a whiff wafts in the breeze; and skies open . . . flowers make a love crown, for seeing my Venus fills me with ease. Shall we share this sweet enduring impact; for to your love- I will always react
Written: October 15, 2022

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Date: 10/19/2022 9:47:00 AM
A lovely collaboration. Back to back love sonnets. Well written, you've blended well the romantic emotions of love. A FAv for me, congratulations to you both on poetry well written, my friends. Bill
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Date: 10/16/2022 2:02:00 PM
Sotto, I am very proud of the poem we created together, thank you so much for writing with me, and I love the image and music you added, blessings Constance
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Date: 10/16/2022 4:34:00 PM
Ditto, Constance, It gives me a great sense of accomplishment to work alongside you on the creation of such a fascinating sonnet. And I really hope that we could do things like this on a more regular basis.
Date: 10/16/2022 1:35:00 PM
Quite the collaboration! I think the POTD is about to get log-jammed! Have read some really nice works today!
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Date: 10/16/2022 12:03:00 PM
A dreamlike/fantasy collaboration Lasaad and Constance, each sonnet complimenting the other with a pining ethereal ambience throughout, excellent work by both poets, cheers David
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Date: 10/16/2022 12:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend, David. Your kind words are very encouraging and deeply appreciated.
Date: 10/16/2022 10:01:00 AM
A divine collaboration inspired by Cupid that has produced a poetic symphony, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Congratulations to both of you! A FAVE for me. Blessings.
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Date: 10/16/2022 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend, Demetrios. Your kind words are so uplifting and thanks for the Fave

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