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Vegetable Garden Does Not Make Smiles For Me

Purple conical blooms lure bumblebee Foxglove trumpet flowers scent that please Vegetable garden doesn't make smiles for me Weeping Willow with grace lures so artsy Under which lies Butterfly Bush which tease Purple conical blooms lure bumblebee But in the vegetable garden foresee Sweat, toil in heat but food that heals disease Vegetable garden doesn't make smiles for me On trellis adjacent pale pink rose see Just a dewdrop, but not on Butterfly Bush with base Purple Conical blooms that lure bumblebee In the vegetable garden no Sweet Pea More flowers for me and food plants decrease Vegetable garden doesn't make smiles for me All I see toil, sweat no trip to the sea Please do not let the flower garden cease Let purple conical blooms lure bumblebee Vegetable garden doesn't make smiles for me Contest:"Villanelle Me" Sponsor:Catie Lindsay

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/28/2011 4:02:00 AM

A whole garden of villanelle here, I could visualize the trellis with blue and purple flowering twines climbing and a rose plant beside..a very nice one for this contest Sara, love, gautami

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/22/2011 5:41:00 AM

Very well put together. Entertaining and interesting write.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/21/2011 6:12:00 AM

LOL, what a creative poem, Sara. Sure to be a winner. I've always wanted a herb garden, but the slugs and snails have other ideas... I didn't know that about the tree of good and evil - very interesting and thanks for that : )

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/19/2011 7:27:00 AM

sounds like a pouting child I knew.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 4:21:00 PM

thankxxx Sara for your sweet words today .. appreciate the sweet critique and encouraging words on my contest entries luv.. hope u are doing better today with the recent situation of Rocky..luv..

James Foulk

Date: 5/18/2011 12:46:00 PM

yes very creative, and most rewarding at harvest time, and you sit down to a fine meal. but until then it is hard work, lots of sweat, but oh yummy to eat those Vegetable out of the garden. can't be beat. thank you for commenting on Green Leaves. yes i use to hate summer still after it has been here for awhile, but we have had a long cold winter and here it is May 18, and i have to still turn the heat on, so am looking forward to summer, this year.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 9:26:00 AM

how creative and excellently written Sara to use this theme to create about the veggie garden in Villanelle.. u definitely will be a top winner ..this is unique and fun and all too true luv..good luck..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/18/2011 7:24:00 AM

Well i am debating what to put in my garden this year. Petunias and tomatoes had blight last year. Your poem has me thinking about my garden today. Have to try and get it in next weekend and plant it. The buds are on the trees so a couple of days we should have leaves. So late this year. Cute poem Sara. Hope all is well with you and family. love phyl

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/17/2011 9:57:00 PM

Great villanelle Sara. Good luck in the contest and keep those flowers blooming. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2011 9:39:00 PM

sara, I love the way your last two lines came together at the end. Great repeating lines. I have no green thumb whatsoever and can really relate to this one! Luv, Andrea

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/17/2011 9:26:00 PM

Very good job with this. I think you will do great:) R.M.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 6:03:00 PM

Nicely composed villanelle with equally good refrains, Sara