Vampire

I feed on human blood -
Before, I lived on meat;
You think I’ll be your friend?
Just pray we never meet…

Jack Horne for Archaic’s Poems from the Vampire contest

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Audrey Haick

Date: 12/11/2013 10:26:00 PM

!! Congratulatoions on your win!! Well deserved. x Always, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/8/2013 7:09:00 AM

Love it, Jack congratulations xx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/7/2013 4:56:00 AM

Congrats on the win, Jack

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 12/5/2013 10:04:00 PM

Love it. How very clever. I think this will do very well in the contest. You got a big chuckle from me. well done!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/28/2013 9:49:00 AM

Nicely written Jack. love phyl

The Situation

Date: 11/28/2013 1:33:00 AM

great entry. long is over rated.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/27/2013 2:27:00 PM

okay, i'm running away from you now.. super piece in just a few lines, jack... greeat stuff!..huggs

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/26/2013 12:07:00 AM

Aha which vampire is dat? I wudnt like to meet it either. Super rhymin brief poem! Enjoyd readin. And thanx.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/25/2013 9:26:00 PM

wooww.. this was fun to read, Javk. thanks for stopping by :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2013 8:22:00 PM

I liked this, Jack. I'm afraid to click on your other little ones not knowing if one is for my contest or not!!! Gotta go now and get dinner for Joe. You were nearly my last one to see today. Luv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/25/2013 7:53:00 PM

I can't think of one for this yet [pout] the muse is on vacation? Good luck! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2013 6:00:00 PM

Scary work that you have penned for the contest..This is your kind of contest..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/25/2013 5:32:00 PM

He Hee, woe, now that is a great Vampire write my friend! "Just pray we never meet..." wow, now that is quite a line there! I really loved reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!