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I feed on human blood - Before, I lived on meat; You think I’ll be your friend? Just pray we never meet… Jack Horne for Archaic’s Poems from the Vampire contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/11/2013 10:26:00 PM
!! Congratulatoions on your win!! Well deserved. x Always, Annalise
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:09:00 AM
Love it, Jack congratulations xx
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Date: 12/7/2013 4:56:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Jack
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Date: 12/5/2013 10:04:00 PM
Love it. How very clever. I think this will do very well in the contest. You got a big chuckle from me. well done!
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Date: 11/28/2013 9:49:00 AM
Nicely written Jack. love phyl
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Date: 11/28/2013 1:33:00 AM
great entry. long is over rated.
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:27:00 PM
okay, i'm running away from you now.. super piece in just a few lines, jack... greeat stuff!..huggs
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Date: 11/26/2013 12:07:00 AM
Aha which vampire is dat? I wudnt like to meet it either. Super rhymin brief poem! Enjoyd readin. And thanx.
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Date: 11/25/2013 9:26:00 PM
wooww.. this was fun to read, Javk. thanks for stopping by :)
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:22:00 PM
I liked this, Jack. I'm afraid to click on your other little ones not knowing if one is for my contest or not!!! Gotta go now and get dinner for Joe. You were nearly my last one to see today. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/25/2013 7:53:00 PM
I can't think of one for this yet [pout] the muse is on vacation? Good luck! Thanks for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Date: 11/25/2013 6:00:00 PM
Scary work that you have penned for the contest..This is your kind of contest..Sara
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Date: 11/25/2013 5:32:00 PM
He Hee, woe, now that is a great Vampire write my friend! "Just pray we never meet..." wow, now that is quite a line there! I really loved reading this illustrious poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/25/2013 4:08:00 PM
Laughter flows in joyous bursts. Love the sarcasm that I read into this, with it's dig at modern vampire romances. Nice.
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