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a valentino

unrhymed couplets

fourteen syllables per line

seven couplets steps to heaven

fourteen lines to date it

a style we came up with something different

Temptation pulls us all into sin with gravity force Wading in with human desires sweet sugar coating gloss Strengths are nurtured and grown from our creator's breath of light Filtering through densely chaotic thoughts stony cold walls Snowdrops open their blossoms stretching a smile to your spring Sprouting faith, hope, love and luck from a four-leaf white clover Daffodils dance with a twirl around a twilight star breeze Floating around magical melodies of twin flames spark Shimmering dusk and dawn of your soul commanding presence Soaring light chestnut brown kestrel swooping down in hunger Low down in the horizon gracious mother of the rose Sweet pleasant fragrance sets sail on the bitter winds of change Queen of the evening sky you stand out a beautiful face Radiating happiness amidst the flurries of rain A co written piece by Liam Mc Daid and Angeline Lin

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Len Gasun

Date: 2/21/2016 8:54:00 AM

An excellent collaboration from you both my dear friend, Liam and Angleline! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Galeo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/21/2016 2:55:00 AM

Each time you two collaborate a heavenly music is heard! A seven to each, dear Liam and dear Anne-Lise!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/20/2016 10:45:00 AM

Hi Liam, another excellent collab by Angeline and yourself. The images just float through my mind as the gentle words sing into the heart. As always you both seem to write with one pen, your words illuminating the Soul. Your pens never lose there golden ink my friend. I'm with Anne-Lise Liam, always follow the voice of your heart. A gem from the pens of two wonderful poets. Liam may gold always come from your pen whether in collaboration or stand alones. Your Friend always....MIKE, A 7 & faved,

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/20/2016 10:32:00 AM

You both did this very well.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2016 6:30:00 AM

- Beautiful with faith, hope, love and happiness Liam and Angeline :) - Do not always believe what your eyes tell you ..... follow the voice of your heart - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 2/20/2016 6:20:00 AM

melting beautiful words joining together as one ;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/19/2016 10:38:00 PM

so many beautiful images in this wonderful collaboration between the 2 of you...enjoyed reading this one tonight :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/19/2016 6:14:00 PM

Hi Liam n' Angeline!:))Wow!!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with Angeline.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy, heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!Outstanding collaboration.Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^