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Valentine 1rst Place Contest Win of 2015

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In Room Enclosed, We Travel This Valentine, my love, will be divine I’ll whisk you off to every place and clime In room enclosed, we’ll travel round the globe Enchantment waits for us as we disrobe You'll lay me down on sandy island shore “Pretend” our game, adventure calls for more With sweetness on your lips, mine own you'll kiss A taste that rivals chocolate from the Swiss I'll whisper tales of wild Arabian Nights And plop into your mouth Turkish Delights I'll play the part of harem girl, then maid Then Warrior Princess come your heart to raid I’ll shower you with kisses, sweet and wet And make you lose your clothes on poker bet Those Vegas lights will twinkle in my eyes Then off to masquerade in a disguise Our bodies fuse on our gondola dream We skinny dip into Venetian stream The scented candles dim and light peeks in Your glow, my love, your scent is on my skin The world is you; you are my every place There is no beauty finer than your face This very room where you've made love to me Is paradise and where I long to be January 22, 2015 For Mystic Rose's Valentine Contest
First Place Win Felt like sharing this one. You can find the original poem here: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/in_room_enclosed,_we_travel_635231 The contest theme was to speak of love in any exotic place around the round the world...I enjoyed writing this piece. Hope you enjoy reading it! :)

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Date: 5/1/2016 7:57:00 AM
Definitely worth reading again!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/9/2016 3:05:00 PM
Thank you....you make me so happy when you read my oldest writes.
Date: 2/12/2016 3:15:00 PM
Your poetry drips with sensuous, passionate love, dear Eileen! Excellent magnificence! Thanks for sharing:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 2/12/2016 3:55:00 PM
You are kind, dear. Thank you. I knew what Mystic Rose was looking for and I played up to her theme. I enjoyed the write and put my heart and soul in it. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 2/11/2016 3:29:00 PM
So very pleased to be reading this lovely poem again, Eileen! Its still clear in my mind; we were supposed to make a kind of booking on this one, if I'm not mistaken:) hugs // paul
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Date: 2/10/2016 3:02:00 PM
This ooh la la hotness puts me in a valentine state of mind. The judge has excellent taste.
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Date: 2/10/2016 5:23:00 AM
If Valentines were like that I wished all days Valentine's day to be! A superb writing dear Eileen!
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Date: 2/9/2016 11:25:00 PM
Delicious and romantic from beginning to end. Loved the creativity and the sense of adventure in this piece. And you mention Arabian Nights which is also a plus! I remember reading that book ... it was quite unique with it's stories-within-stories-within-stories theme. Congrats on the well-deserved win!
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