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Valen Time

Sometimes I feel so empty inside Abandoned deserted so left behind Somethings missing, my valentine Away she went and with her my time Time with which she shared with me Being together as tenderly Time with which she'd sweetly be Away with me where people see Time with which I could surely tell That she cared and I was under her spell But time was measured and short it fell Took her to heaven and left me in hell But this day that they made for us I deliver my thoughts and that's enough This day that comes once a year When I pick up my pen and spend time with my dear

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Date: 10/19/2013 6:42:00 PM
Love the flow of words in this poem of love. love phyl.
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Date: 2/26/2013 9:40:00 AM
It's nice you can take sorrow and put life into it. Words that flow from the heart help to heal what can't be seen. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 2/19/2013 10:39:00 AM
I liked your Valentine Ode. Ill bet you didn't know there is a Jewish Valeniine's s day in August. I'll wager that Woody Allan(whose shrine I do not worship at) doesn't know it either Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/19/2013 2:49:00 PM
Woody has made some mistakes but I can't take back the laughter he created.
Date: 2/16/2013 5:18:00 AM
Writing helps deal with the pain of the loss..Very emotive and expressive work that you have penned..Thanks for stopping by my heart shaped work for Valentine's Day..I hope that you are well and life is treating you well..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2013 9:05:00 PM
lovely... hope you enjoy the time...xox~LINDA
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John Loving Iii
Date: 2/16/2013 4:40:00 AM
Bitter sweet.
Date: 2/15/2013 7:58:00 PM
Sounds like she will always be with you, in the most important treasured place, your heart and soul so you can't be in hell.. what a lovely poem to a dear one....blessings
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Date: 2/15/2013 11:28:00 AM
Beautiful dedication to the one you love... truly sorry for your loss.
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