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Utterly Ridiculous

Was I born a Soul forlorn; And do we find out who we truly are? (Between two Lovers I am torn, Both of which I love by far!) Without decision, upon a breast I lie in bliss while kindly kissed I love them more to love me less- Lost inside our little tryst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/14/2013 6:54:00 AM
I like Dr. Ram Mehta's comment. In addition, the feelings are very well scripted
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:52:00 AM
<3 <3 <3
Date: 9/13/2013 9:24:00 PM
Nice expressions on love and lust
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Date: 9/14/2013 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, good Dr. Much appreciated :)
Date: 9/13/2013 11:47:00 AM
What a great poem. Bravo!
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Date: 9/13/2013 11:53:00 AM
I cannot thank you enough for your kind words, Jon; I sincerely appreciate them :)

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