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Upon a Gentle Breeze

As seeds spread new life, to the corners of the world, out there somewhere, he is praying for that special girl. A season is not forever, it lasts for only a while, now dry those misty eyes, and put on that hopeful smile. Between the pages of a love that has passed, a faint little ember, will bring a love, that will last. Hearts can't be made, to go against their will, when one tries, then comes a barren chill. Patience is a virtue, such a difficult task, and you are it's keeper, if love is to last. Open new windows, let the seeds come to you, upon a gentle breeze, comes a love, that will be true....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/9/2008 4:13:00 PM
Your poem is a solace to heart - a beautiful picturization -very impressive and visionary. Also thanks for your kind comments on my poem Love -A Forgotten Tune
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Date: 8/7/2008 8:01:00 AM
I love this poem, Christy. You are so reassuring and that is what is needed. I think I'll just add it to my favorites. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 8/5/2008 3:00:00 PM
A gentle and visionary poem. Really enjoyed reading this one. Well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 8/5/2008 2:44:00 PM
Beautiful and so very true. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 8/5/2008 12:34:00 PM
Christy The sentiments in this beautiful poetic write is so lovely. A season is not forever, isn't that the truth. Sending good thoughts your way. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/5/2008 11:44:00 AM
You offer beautiful words of comfort from your ever loving heart. An outstanding poem filled with empathy and love. Awesome! Love, Shar
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Date: 8/5/2008 6:30:00 AM
Yes! so beautiful and so true - words to live by, this poem speaks volumes of love. Awesome awesome write. Blessings, Kristin
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