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Upon a Bed of Petals

There in a bed of petals rests The latest blooms burst from their nests Beneath the trees in even's shade Those nodding flowers dipped and swayed And one more tender petal fell The coloured bed of scents to swell I'll rest me in this quiet shade 'Till sunset's glow does quickly fade And rest me in these petals sweet No kingly throne made greater seat From thence the view I shall survey The setting sun, the flowers gay And if, perhaps, I then should tire I'd follow this, my heart's desire And there upon that petalled bed I'd rest my weary, happy head Perfumed by fragrance from the ground To go where pleasant dreams abound Written for the contest by the same name. First Place.

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Date: 4/16/2013 10:49:00 AM
Congrats on your winning poem Isaiah.
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:17:00 PM
Isaiah, congratulations with your beautiful poem. A very lovely winning poem in Gail's contest. take care * xox-PD
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:45:00 AM
Beautiful...Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 4/14/2013 6:52:00 PM
Nice poem! Great win! J
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations Isaiah, nice one xx
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:21:00 AM
Simply beautiful Isaiah! Congratulations.
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:19:00 AM
Isaiah, This is a gem! Your words and the flow are absolutely perfect. I loved it! Congratulations to you... Samia
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Date: 3/31/2013 10:59:00 AM
Pure poetry.....I savoured every line and wanted to be there. Good Luck with this beautiful piece.
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Date: 3/30/2013 11:56:00 AM
Wow! You are good! Such beautiful poetic language. Best wishes in the contest, Isaiah! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/30/2013 7:37:00 AM
this is just gorgeous! i love it!
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Date: 3/30/2013 5:05:00 AM
What a coincidence..i wrote a haiku about a petal earlier..but mine describes thristiness whilst your poem describes beauty..I love this verse-And one more tender petal fell/the coloured bed of scents to swell..so soft so sweet this verse..almost describing more than a peta..I ll.ove your poem..and going to my favs : )
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Date: 3/29/2013 9:45:00 PM
I really enjoy reading your poetry, you rhyme so perfectly and your flow is so exquisite! I truly loved this delightful poem that you have written here with utter perfection! You have impressed me with this piece, Great work!!
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